Mute Beauty - Reviews

Thos novel is pretty nice, the Character Development is solid. The obly problem is thst its getting kinda boring. Humiliated Breakthrough FaceslapIts a Endless circle, with no interesting plot.What is even more sad is that the Mc just learns new technics but doesnt do anything on his own, the plot armor is so strong that even a chicken could be the emporer. Dont want to be mean but thats it

Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone

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to be honest I may never find a better writer than pancake.

TLDR: interesting novel due to the cast of the Villainess and her plotting rather than the MC that is worth a read even with its weak points.The story is moving at an acceptable pace. The most interesting character in the novel is not the MC but the villainess. The MC is boring and uninteresting at the moment. The story has been progressing because of the Villainess’ machinations… which is understandable as the story unfolds. However, I hope the MC actually becomes something more than what he is currently and sooner rather than later. I’m not asking for him to flip a switch overnight. I just would want the MC to have some actual character progression and interesting introspection and inner growth rather than being prodded along from the Villainess. There is only so much “weak smiles” or “smiling bitterly” I can take from this MC before I throw up my hands and move on from this story. Also, let’s not make the MC too much of an oblivious dolt for too long, eh? Just my opinion as it can get old fast depending on how much the author leans on the cliché comedic bit. Overall, will continue to follow the novel as long as it moves forward with MC growth and interesting Villainess.

I'm loving the flow so far. it is nice and refreshing

"I'm looking forward to this fight, brother."

-That's nice !

- Legendary Skill Card (×2)

As the density of people starts to increase, he starts to make less and less progress, until he stopped in full vision of the dreadful words inscribed upon the crystal. A familiar hand touches his shoulder and he turns around to blind eyes, recognizing the positions and texture of the sword calluses he many times felt after his training. Manaus, the god of the sword, his teacher, looks at him with his milky eyes.

itsuki stop to move and he ask "hey girl what your name" the girl remember she's not wearing a name tag because she forget it into her house "My name is chloe laurrent"

"lets try it "