Good story, but some of the grammer/spelling mistakes were a bit annoying. Also, a group of witches is a coven, a convent is a group of nuns. I would recommend the book though.
Gosh i really hate thorny rose. Insisting a share of others' loots? Insisting a share of others' products? If they chose not to sell to you, then too bad, afterall they own the items. How shameless can you go while pretending to be righteous.