Mein Dienersystem - Reviews

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Chapter 1: mc's score was so high that he was sure to get the scholarship to enter the medical university. but someone conspire to give it to other. they are so mean. Mc crying..... Oa oa oa oachapter 3: his score was not good. his mark would barely able to get him a chance to study there, forget scholarship ---------------------------------Chapter 2: she is the professor Chapter 3: she is actually lecturer -----------------------------------chapter 1: Mc is a humanChapter 1000 Mc is actually a parasite-----------------------------------------Joke aside it was a good thing for the society that mc didn't get chance in the medical school. Because he is a perverted fuk. He jerk off watching girls on the street, take a sniff of a doctor who is treating a dying patient. Say what would happen if he happen to be in the room with a patient under anaesthesia ? he is sure to molest the female patient.

This book is becoming tiring with all the women *sigh. They are utterly redundant to the plot development in my opinion. It could be such an interesting plot with less women in the so called harem. More fight scenes, training monologues, world exploration and even studying in school to reach his goal or exceed it. These would add some much needed solemnity or depth to the story. Don't let me even mention the slow as a tortoise updates. *SMH

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Honestly you really need to read this. YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT. It's basically cultivation turned comedy. And you will definitely notice it at the start of the story. Best thing is, it's actually funny. At least for me, someone VERY easily entertained.

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A GOOD START. I really liked how they made decontamination chambers before you enter or exit anyplace. The sci-fi world setting is also very good. but you need to make it a bit evolved in future coz there are a lot of scientists. The character design is also very good. The stroy is interesting but too early to write a detailed review so I look forward to your growth.

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