Mahou no Ko - Reviews

Where is the continuation of the story????  You can’t leave us hanging.

I've been reading this novel for around 2 years now and finally remembered to drop a review. Before I read this novel, I was not much of a reader, I really disliked reading since at that time I thought of reading as 'boring and wasting time', but around 2 years ago, I randomly stumbled upon this novel and thought it looked interesting so I decided to give it a try, when I read the first chapter, I got so hooked that I continued reading and reading and when I stopped, I realized that I had been reading for more than an hour, I was honestly surprised at this moment as I never thought that reading would be this much fun and that I would spend an hour just for reading. From there, I read this novel whenever I had free time until I caught up with it's latest chapter which was around chapter 100+ at the time if I'm not mistaken. After catching up, I decided to try reading something else while waiting for a new chapter release, and from then on, I became the bookworm I am today, even my friends criticize me sometimes for spending too much time reading novels. All this was thanks to this novel, it got me hooked on reading even though it was my first time even reading a novel, this novel is really good and just gets better later on. It will forever remain as the number one novel on my heart and I just wanna say thank you Legion20 for creating this amazing masterpiece.-One of your most grateful and loyal reader

I am SO IMPRESSED! Definitely one of the best novels out there. Pro1- very non stereotypical characters who are all 3D, the bad guys arnt just bad, they have families and aspirations etc and the good guys arnt some saints 2- the character development is fantastic! The main character starts off as a cynical, borderline serial killer type and slowly grows overtime and continues to face new growth hurdles just like all the other characters in the book3- the level of complexity of the world,magical system, enchanted items, society is simply amazing 4- there is a main plot from the main charachter’s point of view but are many smaller plots and you get to experience the story from the POV of several characters, including bad guys. Also, the level of political complexity is interesting5- The story goes through several sagas and eventually goes into open world exploration with more sagas 6- the female characters in the book are very strong and are not co dependent on their male counterparts. There is a nice balance7- healthy dose of comical chapters that have me laughing out loud in public8- good themes that are well represented- romance, bullying, family, empathy, greed, human brutality, hard work to name a few Cons1- slow burn at first but well worth the wait bc it takes a while to set things up 2- the level of magical complexity and how the main character levels up is a bit beyond me at times but doesnt detract from the main storyline

Dear readers,Gu Shenwei, an overindulged child of a wealthy family suddenly loses everything overnight and is drawn into a deadly whirlpool of deceit and conspiracy. Who is the one who wants his entire family dead? And why does this person do this to them? With these questions in his mind, he embarks on a reckless path of revenge as an underdog, while being armed with nothing but willpower and determination. This story is currently being translated by Transn. Enjoy your time reading this novel fullofsuspense and surprises. TransnSeptember 12, 2018

i don't even know where to begin. The first 40 chapters are kinda decent but nothing special. With chapter 41 the translation suddenly gets so bad that the whole thing seems like a scam. Has to be among the worst things i have seen on thiss app. Guess the author was up for a quick ripoff.

The character design can improve. It's a bit too straight forward. I want to experience the character getting all strong and I want to know how said character has a particular skillset, how did he/she accomplish it. But I really enjoy this one. Not many novels have piqued my interest, whereas this one has.

I think the rule in the first chapter is quite interesting and the way you don't try to hide the expression of the character like writting bastard, bitch and all so openly is quite something. Looking forward to next chapters

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A suitable entry in an otherwise generic-filled website, I mean, most aren't bad, but they couldn't be called good too.Might be an exception, or my personal biases, but this one does have features that greatly elevate some of the reading experience, with characters that might still feel like generic Webnovel-Type characters but makes up for it with a more interesting background for most, like Mother-----I mean, MF, the protag. It's an overall interesting read.Also, side note, Uh...I'm one that mostly likes my book pure and—non explicit but,SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEGS

Okay, so where do we start? The characters? The scene-setting? The hooks? I would say this all together. EVERYTHING IS ON THE POINT. The element needed in a thriller is not just a plot. Good writing is what makes a good thriller a good thriller. Author-sama. YOU ROCK. Will keep on reading your book in future.

I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues.Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling??? gotta love that.

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