Mafia Boss’ Indebted Slave - Reviews

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Make the Mc more dumb please if thats even possible because i'm having a blast reading this it feels like theres no character in the mc at all and the way the story progresses is just boring the Mc actually acts like a bot I don't know how else to explain it like does bro even think or have thoughts???

I don’t get the title nor do I get the synopsis, but the cover looks pretty flicking badaxe with the dual wielding lightsabers so its a yes from me!?

the author lacks a brain cells for example at chapter 2 when the MC is fighting the ghost apparently they are servants outside and yet none of them hear the fights the scream and everything and they only show themselves after the fight, the author only wants to show fhat the mc is rich and he has a useless servant. even when the hoe is using him his still happy

OMG the cover is so cute! From Miao miaomiao to Miao Xiaomao, I think I'm seeing a good pattern here <3 Munya!....140140140140140140140140

It’s pretty good so far all things considered .  The plot is very good ,  these kinds of books are my favorite !!  I want to read more and I really wish i could vote for it but I don’t know how :(

This book is great I really like but the author refuses to fix the broken chapters 40-50 after several months  instead is still releasing more chapters .when they fix that they can get there 5 stars.

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Leaving the assessment array, Gris told him he had to go see his master since he should have returned by now. He handed Enzo his room number so that they could meet each other in the future. Thenne also said she best get back to her cousin but wanted to be involved in everything. Thus they all said their farewells and quickly parted ways, leaving Enzo by himself.

You know, in this story 10 000 years in the future, the main character found herself in an era where the chinese language hasn't even changed the slightest bit, as if what passed wasn't 10k years but 10, which was honestly disappointing, the galactic nation she was born which is the Federation is actually a chinese nation, and their enemy? Guess what, the Twilight empire is.....a freaking Japanese nation.... now you know how the story goes right? For some entirely mysterious reason, even 10k years in the future, the chinese-japanese war continues on... even worse, the japanese in this story are a bunch of cowardly idiots who somehow became superpowers... and the chinese are ALL, With Almost No Damn Execption a bunch of super heroic martyr people, now you know how the story will go on right? Worse! Is the fact that even the japanese language hasn't changed, I don't know how the author thinks, but a few centuries ago, people in ancient Japan used different words at the end of the names like, oto-sama, etc.... yet in present times, the people don't talk that way, and this was merely a evolution of a few centuries, some thing in the chinese language, but in this story, Nothing Freaking Changes.... yeah I had to talk about the language twice..... either while the story is good, honestly the fact that it started 10k years in the future was BAD, if the author had made that the story starts in another dimension of existence than the present one, it would have been honestly a billion times better, and also removed that thing about the meaningless C-J war because it's honestly meaningless to the story and it also destroys it.

"Morning neighbor!" I receive a growl in response as he bangs his head against the already filthy glass, trying to catch me from inside the guard's cabinet.

Rubble clattered across the decayed towers that towered like mountains over the eyes of those who see them, its roads of old gold with layers decaying into a rot of black dust, like burning charcoal sizzling upon the skin. Fire tore through the homes, like a beauty of ones dream that keeps them at peace, like a dance in the sunlight itself just to kiss your cheek.. or.. was it the weird smell of roast flesh from the screaming peers beyond that made it seem like a tune? Everything itself, be it the city, the lands, even the mountains atop that looked over the lands fields like a colossus mighty Titan, was up in a hot roar of red ashes, burning one after the other. There, on the ground of Chard flesh, torn mail from the blades of men, bodied up like a cluster of sadden miasma, blood oozing down from the fresh cut wound or torn limb that showered down from its chiseled white bone.. was it a man, or woman.. who knew, the dead don't suffer, but the souls that were left to stand would know. There they were, crashing into one another like dogs, barking, biting, tearing into the hot wet flesh as blades came to aim upon their skin, men and women taking up remaining weapons that were scattered across the battlefield, charging more into the fierce rage of battle.