Machines and Magic Empire! - Reviews

The Plot is interesting thoo. Btw disc link is expired ?

World is creative, enjoying the action!Writing flows really well and very imaginative!Keep up the great work author ?I'll look forward to your updates!

Another sign-in system. Ugh.                                                                                                                              

Every main character who live this is living in some kind of paradise that I'm to much in hell to understand.                                

it's kind of sad story but I like it. I ??☺????2?3??2?2@?628?????☺☺?????????☺?????2☺?3??2??????????????

great book after you get past the first 5 chaps it is a really good book.,.,.(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)(*_*)

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

when chapter 28 Release? 1 month next chapter not Release.So i hope next chapter was  immediately Release thank you i wait next chpaterrrrrr

This story is a good thing. My compliments to the writer. I hope that you wrote a long fan fiction. ????????????????????????????????????

... Why Fut@? Like I know people have their things but just... why? completely ruined the story for me but that's just me

i just readed three chaptersyour novel has strong character introductionworld building is goodpacing is balanced not too rush and not to slowsome  plot point is like that you can easily predict  very detailed it sometime disrupt the pace complex plot setup Overall, the first 3 chapters of "Deceit Chronicles" lay a strong foundation for the story, with engaging characters, a richly detailed world, and a well-balanced mix of action and exposition. While there are some areas that may need refinement, the strengths of the early chapters promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. looking forward

I'm quite enjoying this novel. I'm gonna put it as one of my 10 current novels to watch everyday, so hopefully the updates will roll in daily cause I won't be able to survive the zombie apocolypse with only a couple chapters a week. I'll be a sad crying zombi cause I couldn't run fast enough. Actually I can't run at all. Whatamisaying, I'd totally die right off the bat. But even so, I want to feel like I could, by reading this novel. And so far, it's working. --- on another note, is it only me that wishes to save all the people? I'd fill up that minibus so quickly. Btw, for all you non-readers, this story contains a minibus, I know, shocking right? Idk. I thought it was pretty cool tbh. ---- on another another note, I'm not sure if this is 140 characters yet, did I ramble enough already???To summarize my review: Need more, feed me chapters already! [4.4]