MR Q DAN MR V - Reviews

Umm..this is werewolf version of at least 2 other stories, \"Mr. Thompson Please be Gentle\" & \"Ever After.\" Literally every character, plot twist, etc  (just different names/circumstances). This one might have better translation, but Ever After seems the longest, most complete version.

Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.

FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS FIVE STARS there you're welcome Ryuu

I have read the initial chapters and I like how the story is setup with a non-mainstream theme of 'Mafia'. The established world of the novel has lot of potential for exciting development. Also the main protagonist is neither OP nor to lack in power, with a good contrasting personality trait which give a plus point to this novel. If the author focuses on main story without much overloading the chapter with unimportant stuff, the novel will become much more exciting. It will definitely grew into top rank novel.

nice good product. nice start to this type of story

Thank goodness she didn't commented like this in from of the Crystal-veined stream Lord!

"…Mother, are you really okay?"

Leaf gave Noah the 'look' before falling into deep thought. After a couple of moments, she took out an empty Pokeball and smiled, "Well, if he wants to join me then I'll happily welcome him."

So much to do, so much to see

(she smiles evil to me?)

"I will but please let me go." Ho Hyun begged, crying so ugly that went gross.

We seem to be off to a very good start though you might want to take more time to develop some of the character relationships. You've got the concept down, just let it simmer a little more.