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Don't stop updating pls
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mc is behaving contradictory to his on belief as he thinks he is not real prince so  he has nothing to do with royal family but remember that one of his brother good to real prince so he helps him become the king but he doesn't even meet the the real prince mother as he has no feelings for real prince mother....... Really?
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MC's life is too miserable ........................................................................................................................
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The Good:  A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part.  Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows!The Bad:  The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive.  A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with.  I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character.  Sorry if that doesn't make much sense.The Neutral:  While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels.  (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
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Poor editing. Hard to read with the irregular spacing. Increasing word count. NXhchdhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhxhchf gxycucucjdnfjcjcjcjcjcucucivigivivjg
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I read my novel, I actually read my novel on the app to re-edit the published chapters, so yeah, I guess that makes me a reader.By the way, this is an entry for WPC #... I forgot. Anyway, I am glad you chose my novel for reading.PS- I have the cover posted below if anyone wants to download it.
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sounds like the story of one of the protagonists who get rekt in "I am the second generation villain."????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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One of the best stories to read. It's interesting, informative and fun. The story flows well from the start. I recommend and encourage reading it.
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This novel had a very good start, an eagle clone as a separate body is a very interesting concept. This part is surprisingly well done for such a mediocre novel.But let's start from the beginning.The world is a standard Cultivation world, with a death zone full of treasure only the MCs clone can access. Not much detail about either the world or the Cultivation system. MC is your standard OP genius who was held back by fate, or in this case his soul was to talented for his body. His childhood friend, a beautiful genius, helps him survive until he gains strength.The whole thing has been done before, but there are enough twists to make it interesting.But here the trouble starts, standard enemies popping up everywhere because he is seen as trash and everyone else is so bored they can only pick on him every time he meets someone new. Classic repeat, MC either kills them or shuts them up with his strength. Classic village noop destroying the strong forces backed seniors. Every character is either a villain, a week damsel to be safed, a pin-up senior, a pin-up teacher, a pin-up childhood friend or something else for the MC to ****, kill or turn into a servant. No character besides the MC has a worthwhile backstory, consistent motivation or anything unique.MC has powerful friends(even in higher positions in other sects) , a pretty talented childhood friend, nearly unlimited wealth and every opportunity he needs, but he still goes the standard scumbag rout of trying to get every girl he comes across.In one moment he is a wise, experienced man who can endure hardship, in the next he randomly kills a minor annoyance and in the next he riskes his life to either gain a girl's attention or to gain prestige. He literally risks his life to kill a snake stuck in a mountain to impress a girl he has seen twice. He could have run in the beginning, after saving her or anywhere in between, but no, he has to show that he is dangerous so that anyone in the world can get a shot at him.In between, the auther even forgot that the MC had a clone for like 20 or so days.Beware, starving of small animals.The Harem route and the typical stupid villains destroy this novel.
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What's up, everyone. I really love this story. Took me months to write and edit it. But I was patient and dealt with it. It's pretty big too. Hopefully, you'll like it as much as I did.Ps. It's a dark fantasy, so obviously there'll be blood. Muahahaha!

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