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Love is Sweeter Second Time Around
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I am not sure this is going anywhere…. It seem like a stupid alpha as ML and a doormat FL who gets pushed all the time and especially with ML who is simply an arrogant ass. It’s ~200 chapters and There really IS NO STORY!!! Waste of money! Time to quit reading.
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Awesome.  I can't describe in full how this story is.  Because it's really good
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this title remind me of "I own a virtual universe
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What the hell this novel sucks. The grandma thing is stupid she doesnt even do anything. She sucks up his money. He just sits there n doesnt even have the balls to make her speak up. Hell he doesnt have balls period. The dude literally craps himself then tries to be smart just to almost get killed by complete noobs. He was saved by a rookie... meaning to say he himself could have done something if he had manned up n tried instead of taking it like a little wuss. Then I go to leave a review n all I see is a bunch of hype with emojis that looks more like a bot rate bumper than actual reviews. I've wasted too much time reading as is but wanna leave a warning for future readers
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When I first reviewed this novel in the first chapter, I had no idea what to say. But now that this book has won gold in WPC 220, hopefully, I can answer some questions.The first thing I want to ensure is the quality of the work. I have two years of writing experience, so don't worry about bad grammar or robotic character interactions. MC is neither evil nor kind. He is stuck in a VR game with thousands of players, but his priority is to get out of the game.MC is a novice in VR games (this is literally his first time playing one), but that doesn't mean he will be a total noob. He has professionally trained in swordfights, martial arts, and many more things. The main goal is to survive, Romance and Harem. At first, I wasn't sure whether I should add romance or not, but a novel without romance is like coffee/tea without sugar; some like it, while some don't. So the romance will be a sub-plot here.As for the harem, I will add it as a subplot too. His goal is to survive and beat the game, not to collect girls.There is also cultivation, but it is also a subplot. And Zach's (MC) cultivation is unique that allows him to cultivate infinite MP. I have also added illustrations of places and characters in the paragraph comments (if you see a blue one, click on it) for reference. I can't think of any more questions. Feel free to ask here, I will reply to them all!
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Why bother with cultivating? just write: [The boy was Secretly the All-Knowing, All-Seeing God; Creator of all Things]The End.. or even just write your cultivation level to max level..
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This was just dumb, I feel like the author doesn’t even attempt to base things off reality or science or anything that makes sense! He just writes whatever he wants that doesn’t even work. It feels like my intellect dropped from the few chapters I read ugh...
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He is torture by his wife and get second chance but his hatred is sealed. Why? Because x say too much hatred will make him insane, but i read he is not insane when he is asked by x. Okay.He can take stats from parasited thing, but after he get wolf body, he just eat the monster he killed npt use parasite skill so he get stat from the dead. Okay.After he got treasure and BOOK from zodiak tomb without reading anything he just go to town. Okay.You say he is bussines man but on auction, he just use 5 million gold coin as thought stone. Fu kingToo many contradiction.
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After reading it so far, I feel like the plot is very disjointed. The overall concept wasn’t a bad one but the execution caused it to turn out confusing and hard to read.
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The air started to blow like a storm. A sudden turbulence forced the eagle riders to back away, each terrified of the aura they were sensing from one of the riders on the back of the Animo Bat.
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