Novel Summary (copied)Xia Fei took a bottle of Siwu Gene Optimization Solution with no trademark, no date, no description, and no place of origin.Our story starts here…- Description from qidianDetailsShort Titlet:tSGOSAlternate Titlet:t超级基因优化液Statust:tCompleted (1680 chapters)Authort:tNine Light Years Per SecondCountryt:tChinaTypet:tWeb NovelGenret:tAction, Adventure, Sci-fi
The idea of the story is great and all, but the 4 chapters doesn't work and it's kind of weird. You just get straight into the story about death and there isn't much world building or MC character background (maybe present in later chapters). Four chapters isn't enough to give readers a background of the story and garner interest. All four chapters are just depicting the execution a wealthy scum who escaped from the law. I have to say this again, kind of weird. The impression given was that the rest of the story was just going to be like this, execution scenes. Not to be offensive, but it's kind of sick, honestly, not very appetizing or happy to read about.I don't recommend people to read this story.(This review is based off of the first four chapters given)
WARNING: This is a monster pet fighting novel!!! If you are interested in reading this because you think that this may be some kind of story about a character with unique runes that have different abilities and he has a system to upgrade them, then this isn’t the novel for you. The system is primarily a pet upgrading system. While the mc does get other abilities he can upgrade through the system, they are very secondary and a minor focus of the overall novel. There are no real “runes” in this novel. Runes are simply used as nomenclature replacing the normal names of standard things such as loot, classes, spells, attacks, equipment, summons and etc. Keep in mind, the mc can only utilize summons and equipment out of all of these things due to their class restriction(summoner). If you can look past that, this is a decently written rpg monster fighter/loot collector story, but that’s all.
ever gonna come back and finish? was a great and engaging story. felt genuinely different which was a nice change of pace. it's been 9 months since last updated.
hey author I beg ????????????????? U PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, CONTINUE THIS NOVEL TO THE FINISH PLZ
Since there is only seven chapters, there isn't much to go off on. However, the MC is quite funny and the writing is good. I just hope to see more scenes of the MC and the ML together.
I like that MC have a proper goal, so the story will be followed well. ??The plot is intriguing and different, kind of systemic vampires story. ?Some paragraps were too long, but you can easily edit that any time. ???u200d♀️This novel is really tempting for fantasy/vampire fans.?Names were chosen well, mc looks enjoyable and trustworthy. This book is reliable for good plot, well done. ??
I like the background, how the world is build.The characters are a bit bland, but I have read worst.The writing is really bad, but like you said English is not your first language ( me neither) and I understand that.I hope you can continue to improve yourself.But I can’t accept one thing, you put a paywall with this writing quality ? …
