Kidnapped By The Ruthless Mafia - Reviews

Kidnapped By The Ruthless Mafia
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in this story, ALL women have problems with smell !! in every chapter and with any movement of the body, mouth, wind, thoughts, "mysterious" aromas are carried ...
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What is up with this?! Everytime I start reading something with an 8yr old, there's some creepy weird sexual or romantic tension with an older woman...this is super awkward and gross...the MC is 8!!! even if he is much older at heart, his physical body is still 8!!!! yuck!!!
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the grammar doesn't bother me, its more of the redundant word usage, I understand what the writer trying to do. overall, its very promising, stopped at 50, going to let it build some more before continuing to readauthor, if one thing I can point out, you mentioned HP and the fights seem smooth, but its hard to grasp the idea of one hit kill, when damage is suppose to be fixated, or does it only apply when they are in the dungeon maybe make a side chapter covering this information, like key notes or somethingthanks
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I like the novel very much, waiting for more and hoping you don't drop it.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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this novel.already released before under a different namename: i can store my comprehensionit's also on mtlnovel under the same name..
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Only I Am a Reader is a story about Leo Lock, a boy born with the ability to read books and obtain some of the skills mentioned in them. One day, he was suddenly transported into one of the books he read, and forced to survive until the ending. Overall, a really refreshing infinity-novel. I can't say too much so far, it's a lot slower than your typical infinity-novel, but that arguably makes it better. Hopefully it doesn't fall into the typical pitfalls.Writing quality is above-average, there are still some minor mistakes but everything is readable. (4/5 stars)Story development is pretty good. Both arcs in the first 300 chapters are pretty good, I'm hoping they focus more on the real world after the second arc though. Both stories seem realistic, even if both of them have rather cliché plots. Although it is interesting to see those "cliché plots" get fleshed out more than they normally would. (5/5 stars)The character design I have somewhat mixed feelings about. The characters are good, and most of them are rather 3d. For the most part, they feel like real people. However, due to the fact that the main character is going into novels, there is this ever-present barrier that the author puts around said characters that prevents them from being too fleshed out. Besides that, the main character still hasn't been properly fleshed out, there is a hint of romance at chapter 300, but it is extremely slow. (4/5 stars)World background is great. Obviously, some things are going to remain somewhat unrealistic considering it always has a third-party view on various protagonist's luck. Aside from that, these worlds are fleshed out and make sense, more-so than most infinity novels. (4/5 stars)Overall, novel is pretty great. Unfortunately there's some disconnect with the other worlds that prevent them from being super-great, but that comes along with the genre I suppose. Aside from that, everything is above-average. I give this novel 4.4 stars out of 5.
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This is my first time reading a science fiction story and my impression of this book is. .. .IMPRESSIVE!! I love the author when he told us the details of his fantasy world and the way he does the storytelling  too. Keep up the good job. .. .cheers! !!
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I think you made him cry...No more chapters, and no editing of this chapter.
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I suddenly started laughing a lot. why did I laugh? was it because the I was involved in at least something Or was I enjoying my friends getting annoyed? Could be both actually but the latter seems more true.
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'Jack' can I cultivate now
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That salesman's expression suddenly became rigid, and asked "You-, what did you call me?"

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