So, I'll divide this review in pros and cons.Pros:-Author has an interesting concept going for him, especially in terms of MCs power and his hidden identity. it would simultaneously make a great slice of life and action novel -The familiar school setting makes it easier to relate to-It's worth it to pass time, especially when it's hard to predict the happeningsCons-The author's perspective is inconsistent, some lines are written in the past while some in the present, some active and some passive, though nothing that good editing can't fix.-The choice of words could also have been better but again that'll automatically get better with time.What's important here is keep experimenting, keep doing new things with it, try to create something completely original. As for the problems with language, they'll get better with time. All the best!
