John Smith - Reviews

Good day. To the author, I am posting this to inform you that your work is being posted and published by an external website. I have reason to believe that they did not have permission when they posted your work so here I am, informing you of this issue. Please look for 888novel. The admin is a person named HoangThuy.

A lot of cliches and nonsense. dieing sister, “fixes” a vr helmet ( if you can do that why dont you have a job?), gets a talent to create pets in the vr game( the one good point is i havent seen this exact power ) and proceeded to act like a normal Chinese mc in anyother story. There is little development (other then what the author adds in without much support or thought) and honestly i dislike the mc for some reason

The Grammar is not very good for a translated novel but other than that the story is actually quite promising and even though u may not understand what happens at the start it will get clearer at around 10 chapters.

Well, so far so good of the reboot, I still like the original more, but that's probably because I enjoyed the 451 chapters of it.And by the way, there will be no betrayal by close one's in this reboot, right? Because if that's the case I'll just stop reading it right away. I stopped reading ATG because of that

The story is very intriguing and has a good writing style. The story is interesting enough to keep you wanting to read more. Good job Author! ??

The novel is a great tree novel it is somewhat similar to ‘Tree of Aeons’. In that they raise/grow creatures in order to get stronger over time, they aldo discover abilities about them selves

Leonardo: What is the meaning of all these things you have shown me? I don't understand.

If he's going to start from scratch, why did we read so many chapters? I could understand if he did it in the middle of the story, maybe the main character would have gotten a little stronger by thenbut what's the point of starting over when the character is at their weakestit's like he didn't like the starting city and imposed 10-20 chapters on us so he could rewrite it

I like it, It has an interesting concept.It's a story you like to read to pass time or relax. The golden finger in it is kinda absurd and out of place, but that's how it is in all of these chinese novels?

Wow, I just read the whole thing in a day!  (Now I need to go do my chores)

*swoosh*