Interweaved Destiny - Reviews

I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.

did webnovel releasing same novels with minor changes... I remember reading same plot novel before... anyway... it's not interesting to me, it's the same novel as before just changing names and did some minor changes... I am still waiting the novel name with ' I am spokesperson of grim reaper' which also have revenge plot like this...

The story is very good. it's interesting and thrilling with each part ahead.. I strongly support and suggest the writer to continue writing and know that you have ur supporter's backing u and encouraging u ahead..

grammar is rather lacking don't know if their first language is English or not at least it doesn't feel like it. story is a bit to slow for me even though the author stated it would be slow paced. to me the progress of his students is to slow and the leveling just doesn't make sense, there is never a point where there exp isn't at 0 it feels like when they advance through each level so it really doesn't make me feel like they're progressing chapter to chapter. also the students have S-S+ potential yet it's taken like 6+months just to get to beginner mortal Grade. isn't S+ supposed to be some super genius? I mean Sam had D rank potential yet got to elite tier by the time he was 25 while his students with S+ are barely on pace with that it literally makes no sense

to a dragon shape and because so he was invisible and he was born like that

Level: 9  『83%』

"He's fast!" he shouted in anger.

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I continued to snap my fingers for Rias to hear as the girls put their earplugs on the moment I raised my hand to snap my fingers as a "preparation signal" so I don't "overwrite" their hypnotic suggestions with Rias' soon to be dominated mind…

.....اِما.....

"What ?! Frieza, Goku do not approach Frieza, he is the most powerful being in this galaxy, he is also very cruel," Lord Kaioh said seriously.

Wow