Inheritor - Reviews

Ok so the story starts out as a transmigration with a system to ancient Poland.  It's a good idea but the way it works out and is pretty boring and the main drawn of the system is barely used and not even defined. Right now we know barely anything about the system.  There is no info on how he levels if there are levels,  we know he gets xp from crafting but I guess no xp when he kills anyone we dont know his stats but we know he has them. The whole system thing is laid out like a wiki, it gives him info and that's about it oh and it can auto brew. It is supposed to be able to craft for him but he never uses it but to make beer. I mean what is the use of a system if he doesn't use it or hell the author never defines what it actually is or what it can do totally or what ways he can get xp. So ya the system to me is just a hook to get people that like them to the story and just enough to seem like there is a system. Just a few chapters in the romance entanglement starts which is crazy. The guy knows he only has a few months before the king runs away and all heck breaks loose and instead of setting stuff up thoroughly he spends 100 chapters play romance politics,  yes het gets 2 towns out of it but damn 100 chapters of it and he has just made 1 brewery.   I swear the author wants to have sex with his horse, he spends so much time describing the horse and putting his head to the horses you are just waiting from him to kiss the beast and way to much sex chapters for this type of story, I mean like 4 chapters to explain smut. Anyway the story is a disappointment and it's about to go premium.  I wish the guy luck but i dont think many readers will hang around, in my opinion it's not worth paying for. The guy puts a lot of work and research in but for what its supposed to be it's just disappointment.

This is probably one of my favorite books. I have searched along time for stories that span for long periods of time and this just makes me want to read and read. Awesome work!

I enjoy the story for what it is. It's not the best spelling and sentence structure but the Author is not a native English speaker so it's forgiven that the language is substandard. I enjoy that the story is more laid back and that overall it's more enjoyable and I bet after some time the grammar and structure will improve after all practice makes perfect. I recommend this to people who can understand what the author is trying to convey and maybe help out with positive comments and tips.

Very refreshing to read after countless cultivation/magic/system novels. I'm just reading webnovels for fun and I can say that this one is fun to read. I am interested to see how the story will go. It's going fine so far, at least for me

However, even if one could understand the pattern of others doesn't mean they could take control of others mana freely. It's claiming your rights, we must pay for what we want to own and that payment was by overthrown the user mana with a higher pool of mana.

"I gave her some sums to work on and hightail my way out of there. You do know how clingy she could be" he shuddered.

It would be simple, they would laugh. The soldier, however, had a very different thinking pattern. The boy who looked so sure of this and that determination in those blue eyes. Even if he was now underfed if he was groomed. He could become a decent soldier. He himself was nothing special just a little bit higher than a foot soldier. "What is your name" the soldier who now looked serious asked. "Its Caeser." A storm had just entered the world without anyone knowing.

King Cold turned towards some Frost Demons commanding them to prepare a spaceship and moments later a spaceship is in front of Sycamore with King Cold gesturing towards it

2 Weeks Later

Florante suddenly stop the cart and look at the tower with the bell ringing and then immediately turn the cart back to his home with a serious look.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

The man let out a shot breath.