Incrementum - Reviews

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Reincarnation stories have previously been drowned and drowned with the formula of "average protagonist getting nae nae'd by a truck/anything else" akin to an anime and then proceeds to get either OP, a harem on the way, level up systems, whatever. This novel thankfully attempts to avoid most of that. Reincarnation is still an outline here, but I appreciate all of the author's efforts of making the reincarnation unique, in this case, the protagonist becomes a sword. The only real criticism I had was the overall writing itself. I was bothered by the opening and the early chapters, where I understood what was going on but the overall pacing was just too fast. It gets better the more you read though. Also, might I say about the protagonist's name: Kylo? XP. I hope he's not related to Kylo Ren from Star Wars (just kidding XD)All in all, it's a simple but easy to understand read. There's enough in here to make you think "well, this is certainly different than most reincarnation novels."

loved how the story started , as I was reading it was like I was there watching everything happening

Luke coughed softly. "Alex... How are you doing?"

As he stepped out he was greeted with a bright red sun in his eyes and an almost suffocating wave of heat that immediately made sweat form on his brow.

A vicious glint could be seen from his eyes that burned like flames. Well, at least it looked like it. But in fact, his eyes were red since the day he was born.

"… I would like that very much." I opened my menu and turned off the BGM.

"Tree?" muttered him in question because of the appearance of the tree in the sewer.

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Hello! I'm just a shameless writer leaving a review on her own story. ?I am an "experienced" writer that was active between 2014 and 2018 till I stopped writing because of personal reasons. Recently I started to get back in writing business and while I might not be in my prime, I hope to deliver an engaging story that readers might enjoy. ^~^ Unfortunately English is not my first language, so please bare with me ?.  From this point on, I encourage you to give a story a try, or if you are interested, you can go on and read how the story was created. Toodolo~_________•°•°•_________There was this one story idea that was going on in my head for a long time and that I wanted to put on paper, but when I started, I noticed one thing. The story and world building I thought of was so complicated that I struggled to put it all in paper. I had to make sure that the readers would understand the story and what is going on without too much info dump and due to my long break in writing, I had to drop the story and take a step back to rearrange it. Wanting to write something more simple, I came up with a premise of a vampire hunter turned vampire, thinking that it would add a nice twist to the story. From that point on, I continued to start thinking about the characters and arcs I want to write till I finally got an outline of a story I want to tell. With the help and support of my friends and boyfriend, I managed to gather enough motivation to make this story alive and to get here where I am today. And so, here we are! What I love the most is seeing people enjoying in what I do, so I would be more than grateful if I could get some feedback! I wish you a nice rest of the day and happy reading! ?

As I'm about to reach 100 chapters, I think it is best to leave a review now. Writing Quality: I leave it 5 since, although alterations slowly appeared, I am consistent on the quality, from complex to simple, as I'm also experimenting and learning along the way. If you dislike something, do let me know!Stability of Updates: It's undeniable that the first month's updates sucks, but after I got into premium, I have been consistent in updating 2 chapters per day. Although I wonder how will I be able to remain consistent while studying in a state university, but, hey, I'm trying my best!Story Development: A shameless five stars. Firstly, my foreshadowing and my not outlined plan in my head has been consistently written with some alterations, of course. Secondly, although I have yet to end the volume 1, I am confident that the development will lead to what I have envisioned as I was meticulously setting those flags. Lastly and most importantly, the story development are deeply aligned to the characters and world background without straining each other.Character Design: Another shameless five stars. From Qwanisha to others, they have a very dinstict character aspects, that even I, the author, felt like I was not writing what they are supposed to say, but narrating what they are saying. Comically, even I found my side characters unpredictable--of course, except my main character since we can easily familiriaze how he reacts. As the MC and his beasts are the limelight, I am trying my best to design a likeable different characters of his beasts.World Background: Another shameless 5 stars. I introduced races and was trying my best to put emphasize to them--faeries, luminaries, something you weren't familiar with. These races are relevant on their relationship with the humans, especially the main character and side characters. Of course, we should talk about the Tower--It is an existence that challenges the invited players to ascend each floor. I am currently focused in The Trial, as it covers two volume--Volume 1: Hellish Trial, Volume 2: Heart of the Burg. However, the Trial already emanated the challenges of each floor should be, resulting on taking some time to formulate it to the best of my abilities. In addition, the world building has a heavy emphasis on this story, as the world not only revolve around the Tower but the Earth, i.e. its current state, technology, etc.FAQ 1: Will there be romance author?As of now, I haven't decided on the female lead yet, so it might happen on Volume 3.FAQ 2: Harem?Sadly, no. I'm not into an idea of being in a relationship with more than one.FAQ 3: Is MC an idiot?Hmm, if you are used to being alone and have faced the harshness of the reality, you will have a different values and vision. He might commit some mistakes, but he'll continue to learn.FAQ 4: Aren't you shameless for giving your first review and rated it as 5 stars?I am, no doubt, an author who disliked his stories, but this one... I like it. Since I am the first to give a review, why won't I be biased? XDNow read it and let me know your thoughts!