In Highschool DXD as a Player - Reviews

didn't notice grammar mistakes, tried to give as much info, necessary to understand the world... though it sounds a little like an English essay

To be honest, let me tell you something it's shit. It's horrible, the story itself has no plot it's about some cliche revenge shit and it's repeating the same shit all over again until the author fucking dies because of his stupid long running manhua with no chracter background and story. To be honest with you all, why haven't the author made a character with a story that we could relate them like a tragic villain and hero or at least that makes the story sense. But this shit is a fucking joke zero out ten for me.

The story starts out interestingly enough but turns into justifications to pursue women. The cheating and pursuit of girls in this novel are disgusting to me. I find the novel offensive. Chapters 1-19 are okay when looking at web novel standards but from chapter 20 on I'm disgusted with the novel. I've read as far as chapter 25. Not a book I'd recommend

i like harems!, too many haters of harems Even so I like novels without harem, I like novels in general if you take the plot well (not that kind of plot that you are thinking XD)Anyway author writes what you like and I WILL ENJOY IT IF I LIKE THANKS!........

Pleasantly surprised. Went into this with no expectations but enjoyed volume one. Hope this continues and curious to see where the author takes Ed.

So far so good. Interesting theme, would be great to see battles that Alexander was famous for in his life. Keep writing and churning out chapters.

Overall nice to read but is ultimately unoriginal and bland. It's a typical, 'oh wow new loot and random things which make the MC stronger'. A lot of things going on but no real depth to either the characters or world.

the novel is a mess.. the plot is interesting but the writing and explanation is a mess, very bad structure of sentences. It's hard to understand a sentence but somehow you make sense of it after reading the paragraph.. I don't know how to explain, it's the eighth wonder of the world.

The girl replies sounding a bit unmotivated: "Well, the ones you can find in the city are useless against them as well, they are a bit too weak and got no type advantage either. Also they are boring, most of them can be found at every corner. In that case, I'm better off with my trained rockruff."

I pulled away and sat against a stack of blue wrestling matts. I looked around, little light filtered in, and the few beams that did were already turning red. Did I leave the house that late?

----------------------------- Timothy pov------------------------

I open my eyes to my room, I check a timer I had set, and see that there is 5 hours until the... I do not know what to call it, all the evidence we have seen is just a blue light, mysteriously surrounding a persons body, before they fade out of existence. No matter how many times these old bones seen videos, it still freaks me out.