Review first 11 chapters: The chapters are VERY LONG with multiple pages of one scene and is probably why they are broken up. Anyways in terms of plot everything isn’t too overblown and most of the stuff is logical… in any case the very long detailed scenes are honestly pretty boring though I wish the author would just cut out some stuff we don’t need to know everything (Literally first 10 chaps were 100k words) The plot is very slow so I would just wait for more chapters I probably won’t continue to read this because it isn’t my cup of tea especially because the diction doesn’t add up to the long amount of words leading to some very boring rhetoric and sentence structure. Which doesn’t help but anyways if you want to read suggest reading first 10 chaps before deciding maybe 20.
