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Well written! A must read~

it's wonderful for once I even thought that devil_paragon has returned the writing story and plot all are so exciting really a fan of this novel.

Y'know I already have an inkling what's gonna happen here, even after just reading the first chapter. Not blood-related siblings have been the craze lately, so on the romance front, this sounds fun lolOther than that, I just had a slight problem with word repetition, especially names, but that's not a major problem.Pretty good, over-all.

So as of the current date, 5/9/20 (9/5/20 for you Euro types) the translation is in serious serious need of an editor that has more than two brain cells rubbing together in their head. That said, while desperately in need of an editor the story itself is still readable, the grammar, while bad, is not MTL-bad.The story itself, the characters so far, the world, the premise, they're all great, power levels aren't broken as of yet, MC isn't OP just reborn with memories and hella rich. No system or goldfinger.  I enjoy these deep dive VRMMO type stories and this one is a nice take on it.

I am not sure if I am even qualified to review because the author here is really really good. I just started by reading a few chapters to give it a go and the whole time it got me craving for more. I will be back to read from the first again when I start my break. This deserves an undivided focus to read. At least I believe so ^^

Hello! I am the author of this novel!I rated my novel based on my opinions and since I am a newbie at being a writer, my grammar is going to be messy so just comment about the wrong grammar on the paragraphs or something like suggestions.The story development is kind of fast but there is always an event that will occur in the future.As for the character design, I think I did a good job too since I planned this thing a very long time ago. Like the MC's messy personality.As for the updates, I can notify you if I can't update for a day or two. But it is somehow... rare.The schedules are always one chapter per day at 00:00 or midnight.Lastly, for the world background. I feel like I am interested in it, too.

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it is enjoyable to read.i personaly find myself reading this, so i can say that it is enjoyable as I read of it.indeed, only by reading it can you say it is ejoyable to read                                                 requested by Murphy_

First, let me say that my reviews of any book I do may seem harsh. They are meant help guide growth. However this author is by all accounts better than most on this site that I’ve had the chance to read. Although not a lot is known about the background of the “world(s)” the characters are developed to the point you feel invested in what happens to them. The author may not be the most stable of releasers, but he releases frequently and is trying to properly balance life and art. This is always a challenge for young authors and he deserves respect for trying to make sure the quality of his work doesn’t drop. I anticipate and expect great things to follow as LamenThief grows alongside his story. You would be wise to join before too many chapters pile up in front of you.

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??

a really good story that does into themes I have never really seen done before. The duel sport was an idea that I really liked, and hope goes further into the story.

Anyway, it wasn't much later that I learned that I could converse with the person which introduced himself as Leto.