His Destined Luna - Reviews

LOL THE MC’S FIRST WIFE IS FROM A BROTHEL!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHA COULDN’T CATCH ME LOVING OR MARRYING A WOMAN WHO SLEEPS WITH HUNDREDS OF MEN!!

WARNING: Reading this story might make your little brother grow 2 inches longer. Read it at your own risk....EXTREMELY SEXUAL...Don't read this in public places

Posing as an author? or posting wihout permit? Taking another group translation? Even misleading people using another novel cover with the similar name that is Virtual World : Close Combat Mage.

I love the premise of the story! Chapters can still improve after a round of edit. I suggest you do that once you've reached chapter 10. Keep up the good work and best wishes to you and to our little John in the story. Also, I would appreciate it if you can drop a review of my novel too—The Last Dragon Hunter. Thanks in advance!

Hi guys, as usual shameless author review here.I’m new as an author so mistakes are bound to happen, bur don’t worry I will definitely improve as times goes by. So critics are welcome!For the story, there will be many cursing as the mc background is a college student degenerate. If you like mc that doesn’t give af so much and sometimes sheer evil, you’re in the right place!Hope you enjoy and stick to the story. Don’t forget to put this novel into your library, drop a review, and vote power stones to help this novel in WPC #302Cheers!

Sci-Fic genre is one of hardest.Me as a reader sometimes reading this kind of genre makes me slowpoke I can't  understand the flow of their novel but this is amazing, the conflict of the novel site vividly. I easily catch up to the flow of the story. Kudos author keep it up.:c

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If you are looking for a good sports/football novel, this is the one. Currently the MC is transitioning from Belgium League 2 to Sheffield United in League One of the EFL.

The story has a great potential. It's an interesting plot and the stability of updates is impressive. I saw that in the last part of every chapter, there is a set date on when you will update the next episode, and for me, it's a good idea. Great start author!

Well, what can I say about this. I thought (like most of us would I'm sure) that the author would butcher such a delicate genre of exp. However with each new sentence and every page turn I felt more and more immersed! The delicacy of the capitalisation on the "E" and the beautiful almost curvaceous "x" topped off with an upright unfaultable "p" really brought this particular story to a climax for me, the twist in the middle when we learn that *spoiler* "e" had actually loved "p" and not "x" all along *spoiler* made my blood boil with excitement! I couldn't wait to see what x would do... Get revenge? Or be the bigger person (or letter in this case). Please give me the last chapters I cannot bear to see such a masterpiece go to waste, I am so excited to see if x will turn to the dark side. Thank you.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHh Screw qidians character count, also good novel only problem is not enough chapters to binge otherwise 5/5

Really good book, I hope everyone does give a shot and this book is soogood...I am not really into this type of book but I like it so far and I also think you guys will like it so do read once...