Hello World ! - Reviews

im really enjoying the story, but i think the story with luca and ariel is lacking

I wasn't really expecting much when I started reading this novel, but it surprised me. We met a young boy who full of hopes strive to become an engineer, but unexpectedly gets a power in an attack. Young boy slowly becomes different and suffers through tragedies like torture and deah of his father. Sometimes you wonder if the author is a sadist... My favorite part is the recollection of past livesActually maybe Dupe getting pregnant.... Cannot decide.Overall I just adore how this story defines emotional growth thought experience and never making it weird.Thank you for writing

Overall it's a pretty good one and i don't mind being slow paced,but the character is too weak and his growth is really slow to the point he can barely beat the weakest bunch,always needing protection from someone stronger,and characters who could end him easily just keeps on popping up in a place considered like a beginner zone.This is simply frustrating because you know the mc can't even protect himself not to mention his Selena because you know he doesn't have any trump card and is too weak to do anything to even the weaker canon fodders

I read until 40chapters honestly speaking it's very bad I felt like droping it so many times after chapter 12 but i I converted myself to give it a chance everytime finally after 40 chapters I can't convince myself to move forward to read it ..It worst novel I read in this app..

Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

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colbob:pfft! 2% punch!!

"With no orb to hold the two clans, every other clan was brought from the orbs aswell. The clans became united, and yet separate."

Sarwan was looking at me apologetically.

to be continued...

Late afternoon that day, I finally wake up.