Heaven's Path - Reviews

there are still a few concepts that i can never wrap my head around. yet, i recognise a good story when i see one. i may not like what i read so far, but it is a gripping tale for sure.

An idiot with annoying female characters who pressure him to do things for them. At first it was funny he was trying to be liar but he wasn't a good one. What makes it worse is he time travelled and he uses classics whether it is music or movies and highly makes them so cheap and undeserving. if you are gonna copy at least make good use of it.

Total thrash novel till chapter 15... But I really hope it becomes a great novel. Cheering for it................................................................... . ................................................................................................................................................................................................

'Damn you Kim Jiho!', Suki cursed him a million times in her head.

Then, seeing her hand and the dagger tainted with Garnel's blood, she held in a scream as she hastily threw the reddened dagger away from her in disgust.

"Tch helmeppo"Zoro baixinho

Minato teleported Away leaving both Naruto and Ryu  together Alone

"Hehe you can't go up there just yet," the voice of the little girl said with a giggle off to their left. When they all looked over they saw her sitting on top of the T-rex's head.

Integrating system with host

"Nothing is impossible if you believe in it!" Yoongi smiled like some creepy psychopath as he was using this high tone like he was quoting from a fairytale.

"Where are we going?" I asked, looking back at the party behind us.

But the meteor men beg to differ