Healing Heart - Reviews

Hey author please release more chapters.

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interesting and I like main character quite a bit!

good good                                                                                                                            .........

The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author

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I like this type of story with detectives, cases, and a spice of supernatural, so this story is right up my alley. The beginning is well written, and I have a good impression of the characters so far. The world background still hasn't been uncovered much, but I think it won't be bad so I'm giving it 5 stars in advance (I have high hopes for the author).The only thing that's bothering me is the writing quality. At most I can say it's average and it's good, but I think it's better to find an editor/proofreader or use a software to help fix some mistakes.That's all. In the end, I DO recommend this story because it will be a good read once it has more chapters.

Ada N.B di akhir sino**is tentang kepenulisan yang kurang bagus. Oke ... aku sudah memaklumi dari awal membaca chapter satu. Akan tetapi, bukankah lebih baik belajar pelan-pelan sambil tetap menulis novel? Jadi, suatu saat setelah novelmu tamat, kamu bisa revisi lagi. Perbaiki apa yang kurang seperti tanda baca dan PUEBI.Btw, aku suka nama setiap karakternya memakai nama lokal. Semangat berkarya! ? ??

super good ! but kinda feels a bit mechanical (tiny bit)

"Master..." Defying's expression turned normal after she saw Izan, she felt that all the troublesome experience she had to endure was now finally over.  

Not long after that, Aoba gives everyone a glass of alcohol. From that point, Aoba really forgets about what happened before that between her and Viltus. And the moment she realizes that it's already too late. So, she let it go.

"He's a high human," Bria stated as she looked at Sal for a few moments as he answered one of Claude's mental questions. "I'm going to assume he will want us to cultivate Dark and Light affinity attributes and then circulate them between us until they merge… Or something as archaic as that."