Gun Elf - Reviews

It has a lot of potential to develop into a great strory though i believe it lacks a bit of world development but its still to soon to judge. The only complain i have from the story is the loyalty which Blaze showes as it happens a bit too fast without giving us the reader time to understand his emotions and personality .

(Hiruzen) "Yes, I have foolishly decided to trust a myth."

The Ship came to a creaking halt.

Pore on it. Whether thou art capable of fulfilling mine wish remains to be seen. Thou must proveth thyself alone in that. – Think about it. Whether you are capable of fulfilling my wish remains to be seen. You alone must prove yourself in that.

Sword Proficiency : Beginner level (200 points to advance Amateur level)

"Wonderful," says Bill, looking a little confused.

Part I

"I hope this is a good enough warning," I said while inspecting my gun, giving the princess a sidelong glance "If you can't hold your end of the bargain then don't make it," Then I direct my glance to the fallen knight… he's holding his hand with a murderous look on his eyes, like always but there was something else there now… something I'm really familiar with… fear.

"Ah, I suppose I may not have been clear before, but I can give you a clear explanation now. After reviewing the security tapes and examining him, we've determined that Mr. Park took anywhere between eighteen and thirty common American sleeping pills called Eszopiclone. He also slit his left wrist."

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In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

"May I have all your attention?!" She said out loud,"Sasha, Doko, Lily and Shito; please come here."