Goodbye my love - Reviews

Interesting characters, odd twists, deep and wuirky characters, and a truly heroic protagonist.  All this done in a unique way.  I deeply enjoy this story as he somehow both makes the characters shockingly strong willed while still feeling human.  Despite the halt in translation this remains my favorite novel.  I recommend reading it.

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A pretty good read, but the author definitely needs to get an editor to fix the grammar mistakes. The story is nice though and it reminds me of Reincarnated as a Sword.

This story got potential.. Storyline is good. So far, world building still a little messy but it getting better.  I like it......................................... Aaa............ Lot..........................................................................

Please update more chapter please because your work is perfect your writing quality,story development,etc. And please update more so weCan read more of this perfect story of yours

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;.Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;.Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;.Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5

"Guess you will have to wait a little". He put his hands in his pocket and walked away smiling at the crowd.

Suddenly Arya joined and chirped "Father! What are the laws of the mortal world? I never heard you telling me about them."

"Wake up from your dreams, Julianna. He hates you and will never ever be interested in you."

Kahime.

Li Jiaming and Chu Ju was still unsatisfied that they didn't get everything from Chu Lian; however they just let it be as they think that the publishing firm was not earning much anyway and it's bound to close down soon and that is where the witch and her spawn were mistaken. It is one of Chu Duyi's regret in life he didn't had an heir, also one of the reasons why he gave up most of his life's work to charity. He knew very well about his wife and daughter's abilities in business and only left them with more than enough fortune to live their lives in comfort.