Glorious Money Making Method - Reviews

Unlike your first book this mc is really not great.Naive Stupidprideful The story is interesting but very slow.The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time. The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.

Will read after you reach 40 chapter !. .

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Its...... actually good? the pacing is neither too slow nor too fast, it makes you feel like time has passed way too quickly, I for some feel like there's some "Evolution begins from a big tree" Vibe and maybe that's why I am being biased (I also adore dungeon mc novels).

     And he was back in the pit of poverty again.

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'Attack!!'

Grant got out his bed staring at the spot where the hallway connected to his room, utterly confused.

"Luke, you must have to tell me what terminal you are now, don't try to tell me the exact location you are now or else I'll cut your finger and switch it with mine. Do you understand?"

'Ding! Search successful. Search for the three remaining Spirit Stones in this world to purify the curse. If not purified within 100 years, the curse will get stronger and worsen, never to be terminated anymore.

I paused and realised I already held protective feelings towards the boy; probably because he reminded me of my younger brother. Speaking of, how old was Haruto? I didn't know and I didn't ask either- a slip on my behalf. By this point I had finished changing and was walking out of the swimming pool with the girls. There was a distinct lack of conversation between us due to the conflicting personalities amongst the threee of us.

"Ya ya.." papah Jeni sambil menganggukkan kepala.