Gangster Obsession - Reviews

You can always expect a fun and enjoyable story with many twist and turns that'll keep you on your seat from this author -- it's early on but I can definitely recommend this story

the story is great, the MC has a personality that will make you laugh out loud. just by saying that I am here reading for this story, fulfilling missions to unlock chapters

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i love this story, but i just can't understand why such a good story has poor translation when worse stories have better translation.most of the time he or she is mixed up and lots of double pasted paragraphs. and chapters split into many parts so the flow feels cut off =/.i can understand splitting large chaptees into 2 or possibly at most 4 parts but 5 or more is poor quality.

What can I say this is getting a 5 stars from me as it is my favourite type of genre and has a lot of my favourite aspects to read in a novel, you have me hooked to see where this novel leads I will be here for the long run keep them coming Amanasci

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A very fun read. Fun enough that I can gloss over the fact that every time a word should be translated as now with the connotation of (present, right away, happening right now) it is translated as not with the meaning or connotation of (opposite, impossible, not happening right now).This isn't confusing in this novel like it is in others because Not is never used correctly and now never comes up. Just read each Not as Now and it all makes sense.Spell check was used, at least in the earlier chapters. But it didn't fix any incorrect word replacement errors. The smarter auto-correct gets, the more evil the incorrect words become when it fixes things to be wrong. This whole book needs edited by a human.

The sense of danger in the air was feeling restless.

"I finally have a chance to enter a temporary space, and at such a young age. Is time disproportionate there? Will I come out a middle-aged man when only a matter of minutes has passed?" his mind was currently plagued with a plethora of possible outcomes. Hearing the question, he shook his head and looked up at Vault Keeper Wang with glimmering eyes.

"Is this it?

"I'm sorry sweetie. On my way an emergency in the ER needed staff. The blackout caused a lot of car accidents. I'll be staying at your aunt's place for the time being sense it's closer. I don't know when I'll be home. So make sure you call me every morning and night. Close the doors and lock them. Be careful!"

-That's not our topic. Anyways. They do exist. They all reside on their own timelines with different space-time continuum. They can travel to others but they are forbidden to make children with other pantheons. Reason for that is there are 2 options:the child is either going to be one of the strongest defenders of all or the greatest chaos bringer of all. If there are twins,well,one of them is defender the other is chaos.