Founder system - Reviews

Hello, author here.First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.Have a nice day.

It is great idea and it could be a great story but shift this from 'novel' section to'fanfic' section .. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

I really loved this novel read till volume 5 and waiting for the completion of volume 6 .I love romantic plot between male lead and female lead.

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This novel is good to read up to 2arcs or books. But if you are going to continue reading it to other arc or books you will see that there is almost repetitive plot on the novel like MC going to another world with no one knew that he is some great teacher of their ancestors and a young master of very big clan will antagonize the MC or some clan, sect, group, government. The MC gonna show his power and will conquer that world and then go to another and repeat  the story again from the beginning. Such a great novel ruined the the story development by the author. It's disappointing. I drop reading this on 800chaps with no interesting development at the story. I don't know if there's an improvement on the next chapters. Just lurking. ?

Full support for you author ^^bThere is no smooth road in this life, everyone starts from the bottom so just keep your spirit up and keep learning to build up your foundation. Hahahaha and for a reminder, there is a lot of silent readers who support and loves your novel ^^b

Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory..

When I regained conscious all I could was darkness and warmth ' so this is a stomach ' I thought to myself. Since I didn't hear any dings or something I guess I'll get that when I am born

--had fallen down the stairs. No, she was pushed, she'd felt a hand on her back pushing her.

"What? I'm 19 now..."

WOW! I look like Tower of God's Khun Edahn(child version), the father of Khun Aguero Agnis, the MC's cunning teammate. It makes sense though, since the Khun family has the power of Ice and Lightning, and Edahn also uses a spear. My good luck has arrived! Even in this life, I am even handsome.

As we got to the house he dropped me off and I can see my mom waving at me, I told him goodbye and I'll see him at band camp.