Folk Short Story - Reviews

Just started reading, but I already love this book!

incredible

Honestly, between the inaacuracies in the way certain weapons are used in real life and the book, along with IET pretty boring tournament arc history, this book really is not that engaging. For example, everything so far and implied for the future by the title is going to be combat tournament arcs. No offense but tournament arcs are usually the worst part of any light novel. Authors seem to stick to the formula and i cannot imagine why an author like IET would limit themselves to a story like that, especially when they describe thw characters using weapons in ways that the weapons are not used. The best example is the Halberd scene where IET describes the warrior stabbing with the point and swinging with the bladed end. This is not how Halberds are used. Its like saying someone shooting a handgun is supposed to hold it sideways like a gangster its inproper and inaccurate. Halberds are held with two hands and the staff end is used to parry and prod until an opening is made where the combatant can bring the axe/hammer end down. Put it quite simply the book doesn’t seem all that intresting 42 chapters in so im dropping This is a 2 and a 1/2 star book but I have to give two 5 stars for update stability and translation quality so tale the score as you will.

Interesting characters. Great plots, love the twists and turns.

one it's a copy novel so point for something newtwo this more like the first rough draft people make before starting writing a novel as it has a lot,he ll lot of inconsistencies in every character three the cheat is just super op on the lvl of wish fulfilment novels but still it's ok but the mc is idiot when using it even a 3th Grader would would call him dumb four a few other reasons are already mentioned by different reviews

The story lives up to its low expectations. It is set at a nice pace for the protagonist to get stronger, and I wouldn't say the story is bad by any means. It's a decent feel good novel with its own unique setting. The only issue is that around chapter 170 the quality of editing drops sharply and without any context from the prior chapters before that point, any reader would have a hard time understanding what's happening. overall a 2.6 as my rating states.

I don’t like the way they put the game so unfair to solo players and poor ones. Who would play this game? Only rich players?Most gamers are not rich and just normal family and in an average salary. Also, it’s only half an hour in the game and they are already in much advantage... then only beta testers are going to reign this world. New players can’t keep up and chase to early birds...This game is so bad, unfair, and boring...Only fighting and doing quest or PvP. No lifestyle nor something nothing to do with fights and quest.People only liked the plot twist of the quest.For the background, it’s bad.Too much explanation and copy and paste author from his past chapters. (Repetitive sentences)I don’t know if this edited or whatever, if it is then it’s bad.

A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!

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One of those novels where you have to turn off your brain and try not make sense of it, to enjoy.(I’m serious)Other than that though yeah, this was so bad that’s it’s funny, so points up for that.

The bad news, I decided to re-write the First Volume before writing the Second Volume.

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