Fighting Destiny: Red Moon Pack (Book 1) - Reviews

What about other books …. Waiting for innocent heart 2

Another must read book

Your  Timeline is  wrong because Sirzechs Lucifer was 60 years  At the time of the civil war and it says on wiki that It is 500 years before Issei Hyoudou becomes  A devil

Pro'sYou can see the writing quality improving as the story continuesMC can cultivate outside of the systemCon's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world developmentThe system is an almost a non-existent part of the storyCertain story points that are added for plot are illogicalQing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master-The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.

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don't understand the story and no background information sorry but not a story for me......（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)（╯°□°）╯︵( .o.)

Brain dead mc. Simp. low iq. Equivalent of a twelve year old with mental issues. Hypocritical to a fault. Contradicts himself. the list goes on. Overall he's a trashy character. He was bullied so what do you expect, all these so called bully victims who don't help themselves or at least try to are worse than their bullies and the people who watch and do nothing. What should one expect from someone with the strength of character to not help himself and wants everything on a diamond plate. He's trash, story is trash, everything is trash. It has some good points but ....the mc ruins it all.

At the nearby table, there are multiple glowing rings floating in the air supported by some sort of device below them, the rings have different colored stones on each of them. There's a red colored stone, blue, black, platinum, white, etc. Overall, they really look beautiful and surely one of a kind.

Today I went to visit my cousin Stacy. She got influenza, so I drove over alone. Had to be alone though, since I'm not 18 yet. My dad always wanted me carry guns and ammo in my car, hidden in the trunk compartment that should hold a spare tire. I've asked him why I should carry the guns there instead of something normal, like a spare tire. 'What if I got a flat?' 'That's what cell phones are for' he would respond. Little did I know that saved my life.

placed the scroll directly over Bell's heart, on contact with the sigil currently pulsing. Then he back away as she took Bell's hand and, offering a small apology to Bell, nicked his finger slightly

"Well, you need to sign here and then you can get a three-days permit," she said while handing me a piece of paper.