Fate or Curse - Reviews

Shameless Author Review. Max has been reincarnated into a world of Mecha and an ongoing Galaxy wide war. He gets off to a rocky start, with a crazy mother, but his fortunes will quickly change once he begins his mandatory education at the Military Academy and the System dormant in his body fully activates. Follow along as he builds himself up into the greatest Mecha Warrior humanity has ever known.

It's good keep the chapters coming ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Well I finally into reading your storu finally. Sniper kept bugging me to do it saying you could use the help. And what the hell I forced you to read my stuff more times then I can count. I'm glad to see you managed to get this story going. All of us kept trying but just couldn't get it right. Oh well. to the actual review. I like the story but then again I helped with like 10% so I am a bit bisas with my review. Sniper went full critic mode but ill be mpore gental. I do like it. The ear;y chapters are kind of bad but around the train station which is the last capter is where it gets good to me. Ken and Hero are kind of funny. I like how Hero looks. I look forward to seeing what else will happen. I hate Kitsunes chapter though. The action almost dulled me and Kitsune just seems like a typical rich boy. Feels more like a card board in the shape of a man.That said I do enjoy reading this story and I know you can do a lot better. I look forward to seeing you improve.

The chapters miss the flow between them and there's no proper development of plot. the cartel seems to change from beginning  ch 1 to ch 30 in a large manner (also same with the personality of mc after only five days).

An amazing story. Recommended! It’s similar to I really am a superstar yet at the same time different. This story has potential to become even better story than those translated novels. It’s 100 times better than my fanfic. ?

Very underrated novel. It has its faults but the author’s originality and creativity makes it one of the best wish fulfillment novels I ever read.

Delia Ketchum est la mère de Sacha Ketchum dans Pokémon, la série. Elle est un personnage récurrent qui apparaît depuis le premier épisode de la sérieContrairement à ce qui est dit dans la version anglaise, elle n'a pas gagné le concours de beauté de l'épisode censuré La beauté et la plage (annulé suite aux événements déclenchés par la Team Rocket), mais a conservé le trophée.C'est elle qui a fait tous les habits de Sacha (qu'il change tous les cycles).Sacha a offert son trophée de la Ligue Orange et celui du Battle Frontier à sa mère, ainsi que celui de la Ligue Indigo Elle rend souvent visite au Professeur Chen, comme on peut le voir dans le deuxième et le troisième film, ainsi qu'une paire d'épisodes souvent en fin de cycle lors des ligues.À noter qu'elle regarde beaucoup les ligues de son fils.

Well. First things first, the grammar could use some work. It is readable, although I can't deny that it hurts my eyes and this is coming from a brasilian writer who also struggles with english grammar! The main plot also seems to be initially just your everyday typical VR novel although it quickly switched to the stereotype reincarnation with a system. The MC just seems to be one of those dumbasses and probably he is gonna end up just like those clichê protagonists. For the good points, although the grammar is pretty bad I can't say it's the worst I've ever seen since I saw things that could make anyone feel the desire to drink bleach and put clorox on their eyes, so congrats because your novel is nowhere near close those garbages. Despite this story being quite my cup of tea I can say this author has a lot of potential for future growth so I'm looking forward to your future stories. Everyone needs to start somewhere, even the first chapters of my first novel are also pretty bad.Sorry for being harsh on the review but I decided to be honest here, it is going to surely help you in the future.

Aku melewati mereka dengan gaya 'ala bangsawan', mereka melihatku dengan elegant. Sesampai di dalam istana aku menuju jalan utama istana dan mencari tempat berkumpul, yaitu ruang utama kerajaan. Di jalan utama banyak sekali tatapan dari para bangsawan terhadapku, mereka melihatku seolah ingin mengetahui siapa diriku dan rasa penasaran mereka itu menusuk – nusuk seperti duri kepadaku, karena tidak ingin begitu lama merasakannya aku berjalan cepat menuju ruang raja.

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