Fate / Lost Avian (anime multiverse) - Reviews

This book is interrsting, but it takes too long to get updated.

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I say we give this a try as its sort of new, I guess?----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal.The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing.I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far.I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me. I wish this story success. Keep going!

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colbob:this guy here might use upgration selfdestroction evasion.

I hope to see the end of this masterpiece (for me of course ?)

Love the story plot... read a lot of book so far some with same story plot but this one is more interesting ove each characters they are interesting the only frustrating part is waiting for the release of new chapters...???

"who is this girl?,how did she know what was in my mind? "I asked rhetorically in an incoherent voice contemplating if I should really eat the food.

Eros then turned to him: