Empire Building System - Reviews

Hello all, I am Lucifer. This here is one which I am writing. I would like to thank the readers for taking the time to read my novel.                           

This is kinda intriguing and fun I'd recommend this anytime ................................................................................

Nice story. I like it's development very much.The MC is also smart and intelligent. The background is also nice.What I like the most is the story's plot.Keep it up

I will start from the beginning :) The cover page is original and catchy (different from what we usually see here)! The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is GREAT! The few chapters I read are interesting, the storyline, characters, description of the background, etc... everything is in right place. You're doing great!

It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.

VOTE!!!....its a magic related novel so VOTE!!!....we need some more of those here......................................................................................................................

I like the story so far, it gives me SAO vibes. The only complaint I have for the story so far is in my opinion is a lack of buildup to the imprisionment in the game, But other then that, reading so far is very enjoyable and I would love to see more! ??????

Goes from 0 to Edgelord in no time flat. Not a fan of this story, the diction and writing weren’t bad though.

It is So interesting. I really liked all the characters . The writter has potential. Character development was top notch.Thank you very much

the 1st few paragraphs was all I needed to keep reading. this review was done after reading chapter 1. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. keep it up, author

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  Grabby tapped one finger against her bottom lip, looking thoughtful . Both her parent are psychologists, so grabby.and her little Brother, Carlos, are always overanalyzing everything . " Maybe the nightmare represent your worries ," she mused .