Emotions - Reviews

Warning: If you are going to treat this book as another munchkin novel, stop right there. It is a book to be enjoyed in leisure, when you can carefully read every word and enjoy the poetic sentences. The story moves at a steady pace. So far in the six chapters, MC's personality has been determined. A new side character is introduced and there are a few callbacks to his other novels. This book is interlinked with the other books of our Overlord. They have significant influence so if you want to understand the nuances give other books a read.That does not mean this book can't be read as a stand alone.I hope you give this book a try. Also if you liked this review (check out my book as well?).

I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.

can do better,......................

Liked the chapters that are available. Hope that the author will pick the story back up. Am curious how the character would develop in the future.

fusion ability appeared at the 40th chapter so this shows how 40 chapter trial reads aren't enough and it should be back to 60 chapter or more if that is needed to love and understand the plot of a novel so read before saying it's clickbait it's called story development

Lol it's been a while since i read something so well organized and it kept me hooked. Tbh after reading so many novels it was becoming harder and harder to stay hooked with one novel, but this story is a great change from the usual. Thank you Author, keep up the good work!

The story is similar to pocket hunting dimension with  more shameless mc and slightly different buff he has than phd's mc. But is still a chill read so enjoy it.

Es la mejor novela que he visto de fútbol con sistema pero hay un par de rellenos bastante espesos y comienzos de capítulos repetitivos, literalmente se habrá ducha con como 60 veces normalmente 2 cada día si bien esta correcto de vez en cuando ponerlo todo el rato aburre

As of now, the author hasn't given many information regarding how the characters look. They describe the character's profession a lot. The world is still revolving around the District so World Building is at 3 stars. Story is developing at a normal rate, not to fast not to slow. And the Quality of their writing is something I definitely like. All in all, a novel that I would continuously follow should the author continue writing and properly explain what the characters and the world around them look and sound like.

this book has more writing spells then sentences at this point. misspells grammatical errors. it's too funny at this  point. it's so bad that it knocks 3 whole stars for me in the writing department. grammarly is a thing my guy. now story wise it's pretty good aside from a couple of messy prospective changes and time switches and flash backs that mess with the progression. it's been Gucci as far as I have read. now character design wise I have to say it's not the best. alot of npcs are too superficial too childish in their reactions and too immature. a whole kingdom ruined by a couple of words and two incidents? a strong warriors who has fought for the majority of his life gets knifed super easily by his son no reaction no retaliation. there has been a lot of such interactions and events that feel forced to progress the storyline or to make a plot  in the story. the world background is pretty good aside from history being a bit lacking since we get told about it once and it's totally forgotten and how the history was told to us via an info dump which is one of the worst ways to describe or flesh out the imagination of the world to the reader. any ways tldr fix the horrendous misspells and mistakes and the novel would be Gucci

''Since it is decided then it's all every one return to the ancestral ground in three days time bring all that is valuable with themselves. Gold, Crystal, food whatever with your self. In three days time, we shall meet their now disband and meet at the allocated time those who are late shall be left.'' The Emperor voices lingered in their ears.

"Pack your bags." He told her, unable to bear the victorious smile she's wearing. "We're leaving at midnight. "