Elemon - Reviews

I'm glad Brendan finally layed his cards on the table and came clear to Deirdre. Should have been done a long time ago though.  I just hope it's onwards and upwards for this story from now on.

one of the most amazing stories ive read, literally the reason i got into reading light novels.both character and story are uniquely their own.

I was pleasantly surprised with this story. I was looking for a story with an anti-hero as the protagonist, and this gem fell into my lap. Characters are fun and believable so far (author has released 19 chapters at this point), the protagonist process himself capable even without a System yet, and i an intrigued to learn more about the world and our hero's poisons. I especially like how poisons give him an unconventional strength, which can let the author use unique effects to have the hero outwit his opponents. Looking forward to reading along with this one.

The novel is good but the orthography is bad, if the author improve his orthography (or gets a editor)and edits all the chapter I can see this novel in a much higher rank.

My first time reading such a writing style.The concept is really good, but I feel like the execution hasn't gone properly,There are far too many explanations rather than character interaction, it feels like just reading a paragraph than an interactive novel.Other than that, the s*x scenes are very well written(yeah...I enjoyed them), it seems like the author has very good experience in it! Just kidding.Looking forward to the next chapters and will definitely come back to read it.

I'm not sure what everyone else who rated this higher is reading, but this is unreadable.Character names get introduced without any context, and lots of sentences don't even make sense.

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Well the fight scene was good a little bit long but it's fine ,..........................................................................................................................................................................

Now! It's time to add some more spices!

"Oh, cool your jets, ya know you love me!" She sat down on the bench beside me and proceeded to shove all her books into her already-full back pack.

"Enough formalities, Lachesis." He grabs my arm, carefully moving it over his shoulder to support me. "The time for recuperation is now," Melicertes

"Can you speak in the Portuguese dialect for me?" She asked.