Echoes - Reviews

Echoes
+Add to Custom List
Sort
Add review
... Read More
Good novel ??#Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok #Ok
... Read More
pretty good book another farmer with OP skills yet life struggles
... Read More
RECOVERY MASTERS//CRYPTO RECOVERY.There are scam recovery firms that can help you Recover Your Funds from Unregulated Online Investment Scams.My recommendation will be Recovery Masters,USA based group of hackers specialized in lost crypto/funds recovery.They rescued my life retirement funds from an online scammer.Any victim in search of an ethical hacker,Contact Recovery Masters and have your funds recovered back.Contact Info; Mail (Recoverymasters( @) email.cz).
... Read More
Do you guys have any idea if this is harem or not?............... .......................................?????????????????..
... Read More
Promising plot. The world seems so dark and bright at the same time, the descriptions are great. Also the main character is cool since its not the typical “good guy”
... Read More
Hey!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
... Read More
Author shameless review here.This is my first time writing a fleshed out novel. I wanted to create a story with good action and accurate strategy, all with a non-OP MC. Hope you all enjoy!
... Read More
As of this review, 62 chapters have been posted. Looking at the title and synopsis, my first impression had been, ‘Great, another transmigrated-to-my-past-self type of plot.’ To my surprise, it was in fact NOT a transmigration story, which is rare in the current webnovel trends. This is a story about a man who had once reached success but later tasted failure after he was betrayed by his business partner(s). But his prior experiences and success did not fail him, as he received a second chance at building his empire again after he inherited a fortune from a past associate who thought he was a suitable heir. He was approached by the associate’s assistant—Fait—who offered an olive branch to him just when he thought he was done. Now, her entrance into this story was one that made me misunderstand the genre of the story—the way she was introduced made it seem as if she was some sort of mysterious deity who was there to pass the man to his next life. And while it did not involve magic or reincarnation or anything mystical, she did indeed granted him a second chance by giving him a new position, a new company, and a new home. Although there is an impending threat to his life floating in the background, there is very little feeling of suspense, and perhaps the rather laidback and calm personality of the protagonist might attribute to that. The image he had presented in the earlier chapters were considerably different than the person he had showed himself to be in the later chapters to the point that he could very well be another person. That being said, stress could change people, and realistically, it is not strange for someone who had—or is currently trying to—overcome failure to change their personality to a certain extent.Despite the unexplainable feeling of unease I feel over the protagonist who seem to have a mysterious past yet to be discovered, the disparity in his reactions compared to other people’s expectations are amusing. They often lead to hilarity and/or a sense of satisfaction, and I quite like it when he proves his capabilities to others (a.k.a face-slapping) especially since he does it in a way so natural that unless you were the receiving party you wouldn’t have realised he’s been slapping faces. Conversely, the author should be careful in developing his character, as it would be so easy to turn him into a Gary Stu who just bulldozes his way to the top with his amazing (plot) capabilities (armour). The story reads smoothly, and the straightforward style of writing made it easy to follow the story even when the perspectives change. For once, I am glad that I found a story written well enough that I don’t have to break my head trying to decipher the texts. While there are mistakes here and there, they aren’t really noticeable or too bothersome that it would break one’s concentration over the story. Kudos to the author for that. I would suggest the author to get an editor to weed out the little errors since there’s only so much you can fix with self-editing. My only complain is that while the story isn’t boring, it’s pretty anticlimactic as it feels as if there’s nothing going on yet a lot is going on. It feels more of a slice-of-life story, if anything, and if that was the author’s goal, then lucky for you it has been achieved. ...Just me?...Maybe I wasn’t paying attention well enough when I was reading. Oof. All in all, it was a good read. Good work, author.
... Read More
As we approach our 100th chapter, I'd like to share my review of the story so far. While I acknowledge that it may not be a perfect 5-star rating, I firmly believe that the story I aim to tell is worth the rating I've given it.Admittedly, the progression can be a bit slow, and there are moments when the MC's actions may seem unintelligent or lazy.However, I urge readers to stick with the story until at least the 50th chapter before making any final judgments and dropping hateful comments.If, after giving it a fair chance until 50 chapters, the story still doesn't resonate with you... Then I can always see you in my next story.If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to ask in the comments, and I'll do my best to address them.Regarding some common criticisms from a few readers:The MC may appear lazy or unproductive at times, but this is due to the lack of available resources that he can use at the current point in the plot. However, he gradually becomes more proactive as the story unfolds.The MC is not a weak or pathetic (he does act like it in the start but don't be fooled), and I can only ask that you read further to see how his character develops.The pacing of the story may be a bit slow in the beginning, (too much monologues) but it does pick up as the plot progresses.
... Read More
"Maybe he needs to be blackmailed in order to be saved. Don't question my methods and I'll get the job done. You didn't say that I wasn't allowed to threaten the cannon fodder myself."
... Read More
... Read More
"Phantomhive? Hm, is it okay for me to come with you to the Manor for a bit while?" I said as I tilt my head a little.

Leave a comment

You must be logged in to leave comments. or