DxD fanfic - Reviews

The writing quality of this story was really good however as a reader I feel frustrated due to the fact that it doesn't have a proper ending. There is no closure to any of the characters the author has just abruptly ended the story. For heaven sake the main character in the beginning of the story keeps hinting that he will branch out from the music industry to the film industry and so on, but that does not happen, forget that atlest end the story in such a manner that he reached the peak of the music industry. The character development is really bad. It is such a pity that the author left the readers hanging after introducing so many interesting plots.What happens to Liu Yan and Zhao Zilin, what happens to Liang Feng and his grandfather, to Cao Feifei and her family the author ha snot written a conclusion to even a single character in the novel.As a personal note I would like to say that it was initially a extremely well written book and I had such high hopes for the book. I guess greater the expectation greater the disappointment.

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gonna give this 5star because i like the story and there's a time skip about the renovation of the house and the restaurant but still like the story and I would like to ask if the world is still the same where he is a mafia ? and hoping ur not gonna drop this story

why did you lock the chapter so early?Why one chapter cost 3 Fast Pass?

Humble Author review: The Star Sovereign is a slow pace cultivation backstory for one of my characters in the main series Magic Martial World written in Lonely Attack on a Different World style? Kind of?? Maybe??? It's pretty good so just check mine out.If you just wanna pass time and have a good read, you can come try out my story. I'm already happy that I can juggle 2 stories at the same time : )

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Pretty good so far.  I like the concept of an Immortal faction. Certain parts can be kind of confusing but overall a good read.                           

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"What happened?" Aeron wonders.

Naomi drew her gaze to her most intelligent friend. Today, Lily was wearing a tight, red, ripped jean skirt with a plain grey top, black converse, and lavender socks that matched the tips of her wavy cropped hair. Naomi had always admired her fashion sense, she taught her well.

Sorry for the late release, don't know what's wrong with me, I keep falling ill and then getting better. so I'm behind on my work. I've cut my work into sections that I need to complete in a day to catch up, so if I complete that section in the day I can write more chapters, otherwise, I can only write the chapters on my free day like today.