First review of mine and unsee what to write down so I’ll speak my mind about the story. Great story so far with interesting characters, going at a good pace. The only thing that I feel somewhat lacking might be the world/story of the game they are playing on and how it feels weird that the demon emperor is not like a last boss, instead is a constant antagonist trying to stop players. When he is a ‘emperor’. With this their actions seem similar to team rocket and their constant harassment to Ash. But in this instance succeeding and destroying the player base. However over all the story is really good and would recommend and the past of the MC is really interesting and would be interesting how it will affect more of the story. Furthermore maybe also include some past of the other FMLs and allow it to integrate into the story, that might make it more enriched.
