Doomed Dungeon - Reviews

I like the story of your book very much. Great

Oh boy, where should I start with this.In the beginning, it was okay. Not particularly great, mind you, and it didn't really break the mold beyond its premise, but that itself was interesting enough that I was willing to give it a try.Then we get to chapter 30-31. Spoilers ahead:So, the MC and his party are being impeded by the Confucians on the island where the land he purchased is, to protest against his incoming shutdown of the brothel on it (which they're fond of). They rail against him, and the MC is apparently in a dilemma according to the current antagonist - he can't just have them killed, cause quite a few of those Confucians are ordained by the Imperial Advisor, who his father and family is subordinate to. Let's leave aside the morality of killing unarmed people who are basically just trash-talking you - that's probably a fantasy of many people on Qidian, no point in looking for support on that matter here. Here, we're presented a problem the MC should have to solve with his wits, and we've had it explained to us before about exactly why this is a problem, and how the MC will have to deal with it. So how does the MC deal with it?By ... killing them all by ordering his Grandmaster servant. Great. So all that talk earlier was complete bull****, huh? Based on how the story's going, it probably won't even matter. So the MC deals with things in the most retarded, straightforward way, gets praised for it, and we're supposed to look up to this idiot and the plot that tries to create obstacles for the MC, but goes back to sucking his dick when he says no.Too dumb for me, fam. I'm out.

Response to ya requestThis novel is actually pretty good, if you enjoy reading op cultivation novel I would recommemd you read it.  My main concern for this novel is its update stability. I hope ya won’t be like other Original authors who update the novel but isnt about the story but note or whatever. Its really annoying when that happens and get your hope shatter into pieces

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overall the quality is genuine and this mf wrote 18 chapters in a month.. the plot quite eye catching, I'm amazed by the story line it seems like a reality fiction thanks for sharing such a vibrant story

So far I like how the story goes - Edward and Elizabeth love each other so much - I wonder what kind of twist is awaiting. Thank you for a very entertaining story ??

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Why are all the updates being released as privileged after chapter 69? Atleast release 1-2 chapters daily for those who are unprivileged. Or give a note for when you will update chapters for common users

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