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Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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An amazing start, I am looking forward to what comes next.. you caught me on the cliffhanger of chapter 5 :(I like posting 140 characters per post.. its amazing
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THis book def gives the vibe of a orignal.Trust me it get's better with time the start is not well fleshed out though.aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Good ? storyline //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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just want to help fix the rating on this amazing and hilarious book I've managed to stumble on. Read it. It's funny. Please?.......................
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[Zhang Wei] Quo held me tight as I cried into her arms. She was always there to comfort me, even when I had done something so terrible as this. "Shhh, you'll be fine… you'll be fine." I wanted to lay in her comfortable arms, listening to her mellifluous voice forever.
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His men had been held off by the, slightly superior, Åscatorian forces, but they had been dispatched now and they made their way to their Lord, pressing their advantage against the exhausted remainder of the Åscatorian shield-wall. They put the enemy to the sword quickly and immediately turned to help Baelson. As their Lord, it fell to them to keep him alive. They would not lose their honour today. They dragged him away from the mound of corpses just as he lost consciousness altogether. It was his own panic that had caused them to face a larger enemy force alone. It was his panic which separated them from the rest of the Ørkadian army. He did not deserve to live when so many had died. He tried to speak, tried to tell his men to leave him where he belonged. The words wouldn't come. He just could not summon the energy to say them. He let himself slip into unconsciousness and saw no more of the battle.
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He felt the right pocket of his tailored vest again. Nowerdays, he seemed to do so without stop when he was in public. By chance, he had found a string of reality that took carbonated bottled water as a ridiculously high priced currency. With the bottle he had in his backpack on one of his first experimental travels, he was able to trade for a strange artifact in the form of a pocket watch. This watch was now happily ticking away in his vest. Whenever Bill felt as if his story was just to crazy to believe, he would grab on to that watch that allowed him to look one minute into the future just a little tighter. All he had to do was move its finger that showed the minutes in a clockwise direction by a small amount. A rather dull smile crept on his chubby, slightly shiny face. This ability was just to good to keep away from. this weekend alone, he made a fortune in a betting parlor at a roulette table in a shadier part of town. Although the merchant had warned him to never, under any circumstance, use the power of the clock more than once a month, unless he wanted to incur a terrible backlash, Bill had discovered a simple loophole around that condition. If he constantly kept the fingers of the timepiece to that one minute in the future, he would permanently see what was about to happen. So nothing ever could happen to him because he would always be 60 seconds ahead of disaster! That way he was able to get away from the bouncers at the gambling den just in the nick of time before they would drag him to the basement never to be seen again.
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Surprisingly the panther hollow seemed please by the word stronger and nodded.
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The fallen angel leader sat back in his chair, looking down onto the battlefield with unreadable eyes. He didn't answer for some time, just settling for watching.
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Lol

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