Desperate Love [BL] - Reviews

I really enjoyed reading this story of Kate & William. The way it ended did feel rushed bc so much had happened & yet it was wrapped up too perfunctorily. The story could've had a few more chapters providing explanations re: Cordelia, Paris & Jax's relationship with Kate. More on K&W's life 2-gether

Short chapters.. Unique idea.. Original.. Readable english.. Minor typographical but negligible mistakes.. Definitely, a class of its own..............

The is average, which is to say better than 95% of what you will find in this site. Very much reminiscent of coiling dragon Standard story with MC waking up in different world with a system. The good stuff first : the MC is not stupid.  He doesn't have much of a personality but he is also not doing dumb things because of a hero complex. Also the system. Great implementation of the concept.  It's only a tool that increases stats.  No quest windows. No dimensional shops. No guiding voice.   The system is a system, not a character. Now the dad : The MC doesn't invent anything new. It's the kind of story where he follows an inheritance from one person and when it reaches to limit  he moves on to the next higher level inheritance. Also the system. At the beginning he spends some time cultivating on his own. Increasing his stats just like any other person. But at some point the author just decided that doing it the conventional way is for loosers, and had the MC just buy all the stats he needed to reach higher levels. Also major negative.  The peanut gallery is just annoying. The amount of time spent on how it's impressive that he is only 16 years old is fricking absurd. I know that authors are paid by the world count , but like there are numbers other than 16.  17 being one of them. Just have him age a year!!!!

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"Thank you for keeping me accompany, I really need that sleep, can't sleep at all last night."

Anna hands  get trough to Harry blonde hair. his hair feels soft and a little bit wet. She likes the taste off Harry lips. Never knew a man lips can be that sweet and strong addictive to her. she wanted more and more from Hary lips.  

At once, their eyes meet. Walang pasubaling nanlisik ang mga ni Cody saying...

It already tried sending all of the spirits after him but it's all for naught... Issei is too powerful for any of the spirits to inflict any damage to him.

Elias just smiled as a reply.

But it hasn't taken down Li. He was still alive and kicking. He would be back for the glacier and the pass.

Most of the humans fled back to Areton but some were not as lucky. The dragons destroyed their ships and they were stuck here with these creatures having to fight them to survive. They created many new weapons such as a crossbow which was strong enough to pierce a dragon's skin and kill them. The first person to kill a dragon was named Falron. He managed to shoot a Dragon right in his eye and the bolt from the crossbow went in so deep it pierced his brain and the dragon fell dead. The people feasted that day and had dragon meat as food. Knowing these creatures were killable many were taught how to kill them. They were soon able to protect themselves from these Dragons and built villages to call homes. The war between Dragons and Humans had officially begun. Humans began capturing young dragons and teaching their young how to kill them. They discovered ways to weaken them, they would cover their bolts for the crossbow in poison made from herbs which made the dragons sleepy and would be able to kill them easier. Due to this type of lifestyle, the Humans living on Garal were much stronger than those on Areton. The different villages had chiefs who would be in charge. They kept the tales of how they came to be and told them to the young so their history would never die. Their hatred for Dragons was so strong that they would sometimes even torture them before killing.