Descend the Abyss - Reviews

Amazon blurb! I love the narrative style

Such a good story ah..but the name is quiet crud I still like the flow of the story and suit my taste so I'll support it... Just like now I liked how you write the events and the world background. Your words is easy to understand, I'm a filipina so I'm not proficient in english but reading this is quiet good. Deep english is difficult to understand for me. Anyway thank you for your update. Pls update so quickly I'm seeing your story in the future I'll support it hehehe

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I don't even know where to start I mean I guess it's your standard paid novel it's fairly good quality but has the semi standard issue of plot holes I mean it's supposed to be a regression vrmmorpg yet after he hit level 10 suddenly no leveling not skills no farming ect ect he just suddenly starts pulling stuff out of no where because of his future knowledge yet all the resources needed to create these things arent mentioned he doesnt go searching for them it's just suddenly I already have all the items to create this or this barren valley with nothing in it take some soldier go for a walk find the hidden forest of night that has the ultra sss diamond grade rainbow mystic moonstone that's even super rare late game I'm exaggerating but that's how it comes off also he supposedly logged in 2 months before even the beta testers can log in yet only a week or so seems to pass before its beta log in day overall author seemed to spew chapters out as fast as possible and didn't make sure he wasnt contradicting himself or forgetting things and it shows

Putting 5 start because it my book and it's good you should read it. You will find that they things the group of people do does get finished and others do and other parts seem like they are useless but they ain't and you should read it more

One of the best original story's on webnovel. This novel makes the celestial readers feel they them self are in it and watching what's going on from birds eye view

He recalled what happened at the meeting. He almost lost his calm with Melissa's provocations. He knew that he will not get anything out of exploding with anger, he knew he made the right call in not accepting Melissa's terms. He knew he did the right things, but there was still something deep down inside telling him his doubts. It was whispering doubts in his ears.

She sighed before smiling wearily. The exhaustion was evident on her face and he could even see it in the way she acted, her eyes constantly drooping and glancing to the ground.

He was oddly quiet and calm as he looked outside the windows. He was just a spectator in their desperation, but he abruptly saw a man with a blue bird tattoo on his shoulders with dark spikes as shadows inside the bird. It was just like George said, the emblem, he was lost in his thoughts. His mind lost its inner peace as he saw the hooded man enter a mischievous black oval hole that seemed like a portal. He was gone.

With a beastly growl, I leaped with my even more increased strength, and used my left hand to swipe at the unsuspecting trio of beowulves in the distance, forcefully releasing an invisible wave of sharp Qi, which cut them in 2 along with some trees behind them. If I fall in grace, there is always an open spot lumberjacking.

"Jiu..Something changed." It wasn't a question.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb