Deposed Empress General - Reviews

I think this novel has potential (idk what you guys think about it) , and this is my second favorite among the six new trial read. Only I Am A Necromancer is my first, korean novels are good.Also. Qidian, please change the name in the cover, it says Fiend but it's supposed to be Demon. That's all.

advantages :1_the writing quality is good  2_ the story isn't fast-paced with too op character 3_the world background is acceptabledisadvantages 1-the main character intelligence is trash on par with greed from overheard no no  even greed is more creative than him 2_main character is supposed to be top 40 or something gamer but the way he use the ability is find limited and there is no creativity 3_the author force the story by making main character doesn't use his status although he is facing powerful organization that_as author described_ can take small nation by a bat and human strength with some ****y abilities and a mask so I dropped it not my cup of tea at least greed was humorous this doesn't deserve more that 3 stars

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(Attribute Points:18.5 >> 0 )

Otto shouted and then proceeded to charge the nearby Treelets, demolishing them with the power of his gauntlet. Everyone in the group was throwing spells and devastating every Treelet they could find.

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She can't blamed the guy for remaining in this state because of her family's name. They were  considered a noble in this country. The elite family of the highest society.

*Ding* "This way please." Cua said. They walk for a while until they reach a round table. "Here is your menu..." Cua hand them their menu. "I will take the usual." Lucifer said. "The usual... okay. And you ma'am?" Cua ask. "Get everything on the menu for her." Lucifer said. "Wha...!?" Aiyana was shock to hear this. "The whole menu... okay... I will be back..." Cua went away. "What are you doing!?" Aiyan ask. "To win your heart of course." Lucifer reply bluntly. "You're creeping me out..." Aiyana said. "Haha! Lets see here... *Take out phone* Aiyana Goldbringer... 25 year old, single, mean, cruel, very pathetic... Haha!" Lucifer began reading out her profile. "What! Give me that!" Aiyana try to snatch away Lucifer's phone. Lucifer move his phone away. "Ooo! Look here. Looking for a lover... Haha!" Lucifer began laughing. "Damn you!" Aiyana punch at Lucifer. Lucifer grab her hand and pull her to his embrace. "You want me?" Lucifer eyebrow flash Aiyana. Aiyana blush and try to free herself. "Haha! Seem like you do like me?" Lucifer said. "No! I don't!" Aiyana retort. "Really!?" Lucifer position Aiyana on his lap and hug her from behind. "I miss you Aiyana..." Lucifer tone went from flirty to very gentle and sadness. Aiyana resist but stop as she can hear the sadness in his tone. "Why are you sad all of a sudden?" Aiyana ask. "Nothing... I just miss you." Lucifer reply. "Miss me!? Have I met you somewhere before!?" Aiyana ask. "A long time ago. A very long time ago." Lucifer smile. "I will make sure you are happy and not sad anymore Joy..." Lucifer pull Aiyana closer and kiss her. Aiyana want to resist but she somehow feel warmth, this is the warmth that she had been looking for. "I love you Aiyana." Lucifer said. (The End) (Sorry if this is not a good ending or the ending you have expected. I try. But anyway. I do hope that you guys enjoy this short novel of mine.)

"Y-ya kak, saya Arnan. Iya sama - sama." Arnan menjawabnya dengan sedikit kelagapan.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

The writer start with the use to simple language which carries the reader along and am interested to read more of this

The writer giving her shameless review. This is the best story I’ve read so far. Kudos to me. I love ya’ll