Dead End - Reviews

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Destroying a mountains because my favorite characters die..... hahahahahshah???????????????? that's what would happen when a God is into anime.

if yoi want to read it then come after 5 years but even then mc will only be aeound 5 years no because looking at the unwanted and lot of wastefull chapter it seems so....like he is just baby even after all the chapter..

Definitely a hidden gem. The characters are unique with their own special powers. The story is very comprehensive and the characters are very detailed, so the reader is left wondering about the end of the story. The author is currently editing her story, but I definitely recommend reading it. I'm really curious how it will look when the whole story is complete.

This is indeed just the start and I might update after some time, but as of now, it is not so good. The start felt too rushed.Honestly, the previous novel from this author had a much much better start and I would have given it a 5. This modified one just seems too easy and rushed. No system should be that easy IMO.

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Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed.By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters.Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage.If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.

a copy of super necromancer system which I don't have a problem with but you should at least add "

Interesting concept and world background and characters are well described and writing quality is also good and keep releasing new chapters ???

The writing is very exquisite and the author backs that up with great vocabulary used. They help build the emotions between the characters which portrays the different situations and struggles they go through.

Mc is smart and thinks way ahead, that pacing is really good and the mc is evil but not so evil that he would throw someone close to him way he does still value people. There’s more that is good but it worth a read and it’s great to see the mc bully and gaslight protagonist.

30 chapters - DROPPEDI registered only to write this review, why! Cuz I'm mad for wasting time reading 30 chapters,The story is one of the best, good ideas, low, yet acceptable world-building; but the plot, logic, motive, character development, are all crap! Please forgive my offense but the author could have given us a beautiful fantastic work but he hurriedly pulls crap from God knows where and magically the 14 years boy becomes a badass in a few days, yet it could be acceptable to 10 years olds if he at least provided a justification, then a series of "matter of fact"s are thrown all over the place, add more "beauties" " save the father" and "run from the enemy" well, the young guy now is an expert after a few days_ and here you are, a very immature stupidly mustered plot with no motives, no details, no development.This is a light novel, I'm not expecting something by Dostyvasky, nevertheless; the author needs to be aware of a very minor little detail called "LOGIC" I refrained from mentioning details for spoilers, and I gladly wholeheartedly kiss goodbye for this lovely amazing work.DROPPED.