Danmachi: Desolate [AU] - Reviews

Great story and lots of fun to it. It has some problems with editing, however it starts to be a bit more manageable to read at chapter 18 and then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. So, it should start getting better not to long after chapter 34.

MC doesn’t face slap characters, characters face slap themselves. Growing his beasts? He rather buys it! This novel doesn’t follow the usual routine. It’s not cliche at all. I love this. It's been a very satisfying read. Flaw: There is no exact closure to Arcs or Characters. Nothing conclusive. Just expect slow development. But I really love the Comedy-Style.

Translation quality dropped after Chapter 44, if its only the Limited Free period, you can consider reading it. Its just another mindless read about a man wanting to be lowkey while raising his cultivation level to ungodly scale. Dear Translators of Webnovel, if you want to pick up any novel to translate, could you at least run through the old chapters to clean up the formatting? Don’t just blindly MTL it and leave the previous terminologies used untouched. From Post-Celestial Realm to Demi King and suddenly to Xiantian Realm. Please sync your translations from the very start.

What it up with the writing? I swear that I spotted a spelling mistake, but it was fixed in a blink of the eye! Sneaky!And whats up with the updating? So far it have been one update per day at minimum, how are you supposed to be able to keep that going? And you even publish more chapters some days!Is the MC developing? I mean he gets lots of OP stuff, but how is he supposed to be able to use them? And there is a lot of foreshadowing for further developments, but can we trust them? So far it seems we cannot trust that things goes as they should at all!Whats with the characters? They are totally awesome! Keeps distracting one from the lack of names!And what is with the world background? There is totally no info dumps! Everyone loves info dumps!Regardless of everything, this novel is a clear 5.0, no bias.

wow ok it's awsome. the quality and story is all good. it feels like im reading very popular novel. This story makes the readers want to keep reading.

I like these kinds of novels since I m a huge fan of murder/mystery/horror novels and I believe that the author has similar taste in novels! This is one of those which I needed. Thank you author :)

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I don't like writing long reviews, so all I will say is I enjoyed what I've read up to the premium chapters.

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Lionel says gently, "How are you? I know you had fun last night. My men really seemed to enjoy your company."

Lowering my head, I saw that she had her eyes closed, her cherry lips slightly apart. She stuck out her pink tongue and licked the semen that was dripping from the side of her mouth, like she was tasting some delicacy, not wanting to waste even one drop. Such a lewd and extremely sexy action. After what happened tonight, this girl was transformed into a completely sexy and mature woman.

"I am sorry mother. I won't do that again." King apologized.