DC: Neo Earth - Reviews

It’s an okay book but the chapters are way to short to he considered a chapter. I’ll keep reading but I’m wasting my coins and coupons on this Fanfic

couldn't go beyond 30 ch..the world building is nonexistent..the characters are so bland..no background whatsoever..things happens very fast..martial arts or better call it martial punch..the mc have such regenerative cells yet cant cure his body..went in a mission to protect the bai family..successfully done yet nobody seems to notice the death of one of the sisters..number one if the so called academy which we dont know anything about..overall a lightning speed pace that ruin the story..

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mc has social anxiety and stutters everytime he talks out loud despite being with a different woman every night in his previous life, everybody ever in the chapters I've read thinks everything weird about him is from his childhood parental abuse, like their thoughts are so unbelievable that it is harder to read than the stutters, the structure of a lot of sentences are not done properly

I see there is an already mixed reception. Hmm well I guess horror ain't for everyone or it could be my writing, but I believe I have crafted something decent

Wei Guiyin just ignored all of that and went almost running to her room, before Ya Zhouyue could catch her.

"I want to keep it," I answered his silent inquiry.

"I'm so_r_ry,i didn't know it was you" I stuttered,..   

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"Yes..."

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