Broken - Reviews

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The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors. Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting. Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies. Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future? ??I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/  a bit Dean of dark king /  and a bit Edward elric?World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me.Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible. ✔️Added in my library

Holy WOW! This is one incredible collection!! I have a little question, I noticed that the individual chapters are the story titles that are mostly alphabetized in order and ending in "L".  So that must mean you actually have a ton more stories to upload!? I'd really love to see stories starting with "M" (mom, mommy), and with "S" (step mom, step Sister, sister). Thanks for all the uploads! I really appreciate them! Please don't stop! Thanks

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2+3+1+2+2/5=2I honestly came to this novel for the  culture!I'm giving the low review because it seems like the author tried to make it a cultural story rather than just plain culture.The plot of the story the author is trying to write is not doing it for me. editing could be better. I think the updates are standard. The prince reported to be a waste is the one all females wish to bed and the change is virtually instantaneous. The characters seem cliched; fall for  the mc because that is the way it should be right? World background showed that there were some upper and lower realms. But it was not too good in creating the story's environment.

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Nice work with great intelligence Keep it up

This is by far one of the best original novels i have found on webnovel. The characters are very well done and it really feels like the MC could lose or die rather than just being OP for whatever reason. The only real question I have is how old Jack currently is, other than that the story does a great job of explaining itself when it needs explaining.

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I only read up to ch 8 at the time I wrote this review, so take it with a grain of salt.This book got potential. The blurb interest me tbh, because I like independent, strong, and self-sufficient female lead.However, the first chapter opening was confusing, speaking of writing, although it got better soon. There are a few typos, but I can manage to auto-correct in my head. At least, it wasn't as bad as other books I've read, but it does distracted me from being immersed. Some scenes, seemed to have weird, unsatisfyingly explained, timing that just doesn't fit with events happening in previous scenes.Characters feels a bit rushed. Some are unnecessarily mysterious, others are kinda have no reason to behave the way they are with their initial background. Even the main lead was kinda superficial, because while readers get why she wanted revenge logically, there wasn't much too make her relatable emotionally. Story development up to the one I read feels rushed (which contributed to the section above). Personally, I feel like the impact of the breaking point wasn't meaningful because the lack of insight into main char's psychological state. How distraught was she? How deep the betrayal she feels? And this continues, with main char facing events after events with "downtime" scenes just being kinda info dumped.I prefer slow-burning stories for this kind of theme, so maybe that was why I find it hard getting immersed. I do not mean to discourage, so please don't be discouraged author!!  The plot is interesting, after all, and the promise the blurb sells (revenge  story like no other) pique my interest to see how it unfolds.

Your favorite author here! As usual, you can't stop me from giving an absolutely deserved 5/5 stars ahah for this book ahah. Anyways, if you have some questions, do ask them and I shall answer to the best of my ability.ps: nope, there's no romance.

I really like your novel, because you have taken me to a fantasy world that I really like, even when I read it like I am the main character in the story, it feels very dramatic. Thank you for creating this novel and keep the enthusiasm for the future and it can be even better!! ??✨?