Broken Fist

Well I guess this is good though neglecting the cultivation related things is kind of a bother at least it's not much of a problem especially if you already read a novel with a similar start with this one

it's back let's gooo

The story line was ok but needed to be a lot more in depth. There was no real explanation of Sins or the realms and seemed to speed through the whole story. The mix up with character names was at first confusing then became very annoying.  It has good writing but needs to fill out the story line mor