Book Hunting - Reviews

This book shows/says something really important, if you are old and do not have power/friends/family and gets framed for something then you are toasted.

I think this is a really great story and all but there’s just not a lot of stuff to do in the modern age with that system. But if it were me, I would start trying to make like a huge VR fantasy game or make an AI to make the game and then play it myself. But obviously to get those skills you would have to get money and all.

So first of all, I got confused by your use of 'heroines' shouldn't it be heroes since Wilbert is male. I like the overall stuff happening and I really find the Ken's thoughts amusing along with how his parent's act

I nicely written novel with the MC being aware of the tropes a typical xinxia has. It has a lot of potential to be developed.I really hope that it doesn’t get forgotten or dropped

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Good story. I really enjoyed the sequence of events in this book. They are coherent and the author did a good job. The characters have character and personality. The description is very vivid and interesting.

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good idea for the story , but its hard to read with the poor quality of writing

He chuckled a bit, "Let's go? Wait at the living room for a moment, I'll get the car. Okay?"

What he saw wasn't the ruined territory of house Granberg, nor was it the rising metropolis that he had built after he altered their destiny and developed them further. It was still the quaint little village in the border of the kingdom from the time before the catastrophe.

Making use of the ass peach's features, my new idea was to make a vibrating ass hole.

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