Blind Emperor - Reviews

Only finished until chapter 4, and I'm dropping this novel now. I'm too old for this kind of writing, I probably would've enjoyed this in my teens but now, I'll gladly pass.

Dropped before Ch42This story   had   potential. My biggest issue was the subpar handling of being a human and a monster.This first comes to play around the death of twin kids stage and the aftermath of how that bs was handled by the MC.

It’s a rushed out power ups. Great story line but was hastened by author. Also it’s a half baked product left out without any updates. Characters are okay but MC just gets powerups in every other chapter. Fights and world development is poor. Translation is good. Can’t complain and over all there’s a lot more room for improvement

Entretenida por el momento a si que espero y siga sorprendiéndome buena novela, espero sigas y saques mas cap , no la abandones y sigue con el buen trabajo ?☺?

A story with an interesting story arc with a dark and depressing undertone in it.Jason is an interesting protagonist to read, his backstory was dark and compelling but he kinda gave me that ‘guy-who-always-gets-the-ladies’ vibes. Jason has a personality, which some writers tend to forget to add. Alina took me a while to like, it’s probably because I found her POV a bit cliché but like Jason, she has personality and quirks. I’m actually curious if this is Harem or not, I lost count re-checking the tags just to see if it was a harem. The side characters were decent, I like how Michelle has a great personality, and usually, some writers ignore the side characters and don’t even bother making them real and relatable.I love the world-building, the writer took the time to make the story tangible and real. It was exciting and it made me want to ask for more. I was curious how the world works and I love every minute of it. The story does feel like a manuscript (especially reading Alina’s POV), it felt like I was reading a script. There were more dialogues than paragraphs. There were some parts it kind of feel like cheesy but I didn’t mind at all. The story is full of flashbacks, it sucks that Webnovel doesn’t have formatting styles here because I got confused when suddenly I’m reading a backstory without any warning. Some chapters were short, so it kind of threw me off, the story does have that ‘anime’ ambiance to it. I could visualize some scenes especially when it comes to reading Jason’s POV, which I’m totally happy about it since my mind usually takes a while to see the story. I love your cover! But I’m a graphic designer ??? a font hoe. I couldn’t help myself but suggest, using a serif font because it makes the cover more elegant, serious, and formal. Condensed serif font would work. If you want I could suggest some fonts to use.Overall, this story is worth reading especially, if the reader is into anime and urban fantasy with immersive story arc.

..................................................Wowthe way the author do the introductionn is really good already, but as you dive more, it became more amazing...Kudos to the author!!!

This story has really slow story development witch is not always bad, but really 18th chapter and Hi don't even tame any beast ??? Chapters are probably not to short, but you probably should change your writing style a little bit. You should make you're chapters more eventful. You should think about what is needed for this story and what is not. You give a lots of unnecessary information, witch don't deepen the protagonist character, and don't make make you're world more immersive. As a example I can gave you "Pure Love x Insult Complex" witch start at April 24th and is translated until May 6th in novel world witch takes 12 days, but these twelve days take up as many as 540 chapters, which is amazing because each of these chapters contains some interesting event or deepens the protagonist character. So you should really think what information are essential for you're story, because unnecessary information slows down the development of the story. I think you should read some theories about writing and construction of the plot. After these remarks, you probably think that I do not like your story, but I was heaving fun reading you're story, and as Your fan I want to contribute some advice. Sorry for my mistakes in writing, but English is not my native language.

Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure

Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!

Really entertaining started reading it around 5 pm didn’t even know what time it was until I saw the window and the sun was coming out I was like what the f### Read until chapter 13 and if you don’t like it your probably on drugs Just to let you guys know this novel is not for the weak

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- "Don't give him any space to counter attack!"- said Kylo Ren to the knights who were fighting with him.